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dean1955 August 25 2013, 21:10:58 UTC

How is he going to do it?

How is he going to deal with the pressure?

Can he deal with control....giving and taking it?

Will the pleasure and need prove to be too much to handle?

What amazes me about these questions is that they can describe Brian or Justin. They are both sharing an experience, but in their own unique way. Brian seems to want Justin to admit he does not know what he desires or needs. While Justin is doing his best to exert control from a submissive position.

You continue to push this story, and these two, in a fascinating direction. Not a straight or direct line, but one that dips and diverts down various paths. While it might have seemed that Justin was the one restrained and bond, Brian unable to control himself from taking Justin. Will he be able to restrain himself down the road?

Can they give each other what they need, without losing themselves?

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theconservatory August 26 2013, 08:53:34 UTC
yep. It's very much driven by their organic POVs in my mind. Every time I switch POV (for real or for an exercise), I'm amazed at how different their experiences are.

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randysgirl_645 August 26 2013, 21:22:22 UTC
oh my!! that was hottttt!!!

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theconservatory September 1 2013, 05:10:51 UTC
thanks!!!

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kellankyle February 3 2015, 14:26:23 UTC
Another wonderful chapter.

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