Maintenance 4/53

Mar 15, 2010 22:54

Go back to Maintenance 3.

Note:  Thanks for all of your comments.  Like I said when I began this series, this is a writing experiment for me.  I'm often unbelievably meticulous about what I write, and I need to practice getting away from that a little.  This is sort of a 'no apologies, no regrets' trial for me...to see if I can stand it.

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trintiff March 16 2010, 03:21:23 UTC
Fucking Hell! Just this "He didn't respond. You jerked off in your private bathroom." was hot to begin with! Then Justin had followed every direction; and then that goddamn spoon! Then the corner and the *shiver* shot glass! And Justin wrapped it all up with a pretty red bow coz' he loved every fucking second of it!

God, I love this series! :-D

Hugs, Cindy

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theconservatory March 16 2010, 11:59:47 UTC
lol! thank you! xooxxo

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shadownyc March 16 2010, 10:23:58 UTC
I'm thoroughly enjoying this fabulous free-form story. Imagining the interesting balance between B/J is incredibly HOT!

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theconservatory March 16 2010, 12:00:02 UTC
thanks! i'm glad!

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dottingham March 16 2010, 13:27:34 UTC
You finished your meal with his head on your shoulder. "I missed you today," he whispered.

"It was bad, huh?"

"Terrible."

"You think tomorrow will be better?" you asked him.

He sighed, "No way."

Man, I have no words for how much I loved this particular scene. There's something about the intimacy of the moment and the honesty throughout it that's just, guh.

And the ribbon! Love love love. I bet Justin's happy with himself. [And here's hoping the ribbon gives Brian ideas. Red looks so good on Justin, after all.]

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theconservatory March 16 2010, 13:31:16 UTC
thank you. so glad you felt it. :)

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snow_white79 March 16 2010, 20:17:12 UTC
I have to say, I love this. Your "'no apologies, no regrets' trial " is working well LOL This new series is intense, but not overwhelming, and seriously delicious.

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randysgirl_645 March 16 2010, 21:02:32 UTC
That was hot :D

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