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thecon12

Scratch 2/? - Chapter Two (Part One)

Mar 15, 2009 00:05

AN: - Thanks so much for all your feedback, I’ve really appreciated hearing what you all had to say. For those of you who missed my edited post and are wondering what Renée looks like, I’ve chosen the lovely Kate Beckinsale and for Karl I’ve gone with Tom Hanks (Click the pics if you don’t know who I’m talking about). And I just want to point out ( Read more... )

scratch, erica/oc, fandom: grey's anatomy

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kickmyself182 March 15 2009, 00:42:30 UTC

GRRR LJ hates me!? So i'm gonna try to remember what I wrote :(

Oooh I remember saying I was distracted for about 5 minutes by the picture of Kate Beckinsale you linked lol epic hotness!

Ooh and I made a comment about Tom Hanks... You've Got Mail xD If I say 'Rose' You'll totally get what I mean right? :P

I freakin' love this, I know I've already told you, but I soo do love it!
I realy really love their banter! Erica's reluctance at calling it a date and then getting to the point where she's like 'fine it's a date!'
I love how Renée is soo cocky xD but that Erica totally dishes it back out at her, i love that :) And I really like that Renée calls her blondie ^^ I can picture Erica just being so annoyed with it, but just letting it go because she knows that Renée wouldn't stop calling her that :)

*Now offskies to part two*

Epic Loveage from Sweetcheeks & her discostick ;)
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P.S. The offer from yesterday is still on the table, I'm surprised you haven't taken me up on it yet ;) lol :P

thecon12 March 15 2009, 00:50:12 UTC

My reply to this could be pretty simple ( ... )

kickmyself182 March 15 2009, 01:02:24 UTC

LMAO @ the youtube video! That is epic win!

Ooh I like the nicer response better though :P

She does indeed look very stunning in it, it was a nice distraction ;) :P lol.

:0 I am very sorry, the portable hot water bottle required my complete attention.. even when it did do something ikky on my t-shirt :-| I tried to escape the house but i failed :( and I'm so sorry!

Ooh tomorrow sounds good, hope your table is sturdy enough haha ;) lmao that text!! haha that still makes me laugh.. I hope to "have good time" tomorrow lol.

My eyes are starting to go blurry lol =0 o_0 neeeed sleeep!

Haha xD don't have too much fun on the discostick, Lady *Gag* might get jealous.

Sweetcheeks <3 Slinksterrr & bath timez (haha)
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reddirtgirl March 15 2009, 01:31:10 UTC

Oh I love this :)

Their banter is so great, I love how Renee calls Erica "blondie" lol. The date is going so sweetly, Renee is treating Erica so well and being so romantic. Also Erica and strawberry lipgloss???? *faints*

I gotta see more....*runs off to read the 2nd part"

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punky_96 March 15 2009, 01:53:43 UTC

Man where does Renee live again? I'm going to Denver. Maybe while Erica plays hard to get I can sneak in... to the Botanical Gardens... Hahaha.

This was great and I love the grumpy resistant Hahn. She's SOOOO gonna cave and it's going to be awesome.

thecon12 March 25 2009, 20:18:00 UTC

Firstly thanks so much for your comment :) I'm so glad you're enjoying this :) And secondly, sorry about the slow reply, real life caught up with big time. Hopefully I'll find some free time to write more soon!

hot_4_hahn March 15 2009, 03:23:04 UTC

I love how Erica's playing along with Renee's spunk, giving back as good as she gets.

But it's sweet how she's attracted to and intrigued by Renee, despite her best intentions

I'm really adoring this story...now on to part two...

thecon12 March 25 2009, 20:18:13 UTC

greys_1 March 15 2009, 11:52:23 UTC

Firstly the term ‘learning curve’ has gotten me through a lot of life’s experiences; I loved the use of it. Blondie. Dear god. So simple, yet I think this is the first story someone has refered to dr erica Hahn as blondie! Erica melts at renee’s playfull cocky, arrogance. She tries to fight it. I laugh out loud to this story, which isn’t common. Yeah don’t believe people when they type lol. Lies!! I love the vibe you have already created with them. Fav lines:

there was just something about this woman that made her feel irritated in a way that she wanted to smile,

“I accept the challenge blondie, but when you fall for me, remember that I told you it would happen the day we met.”

Renée let out a laugh, “And so the blonde goddess finally admits to being on a date with the strange woman she met in a bar.”

thecon12 March 25 2009, 20:18:23 UTC

spotlesssky March 15 2009, 16:02:13 UTC

Renee's character is so lovable! I like that she always takes the initiative to take every step and Erica follows along with her. The "play cool" Erica is adorable!

Heading to part two~~

thecon12 March 25 2009, 20:18:33 UTC