The Dance of Deception 2/5 - Chapter Two - Deceiving (Part Two)

[thecon12]

Chapter One - Facade (Part One)
Chapter One - Facade (Part Two)
Chapter Two - Deceiving (Part One)

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Callie sat impatiently on the end of the bed waiting for the blonde to come out of the bathroom. She’d kicked her ass into gear and jumped out of bed when the flashes of last night became more vivid; borrowing a pair

Comments

[mstrprgrmr]

WOW...
Sad but amazing as always.
I anxiously await the next chapter. Can't wait to see where the journey takes them.
=D

[thecon12]

Thanks so much for your comment :) I'm glad you enjoyed this rollercoaster of a chapter, and hopefully you'll enjoy seeing the next part of their journey, no matter where it might lead them.

poignant

[hot_4_hahn]

That was so wonderfully rendered…how Erica took her confusion, her embarrassment, her pain out on Callie, the morning after.
These two make it so hard on themselves. But your writing is so realistic. Sometimes you just can’t see the forest for the trees. And change is scary, right?

What a beautiful, heart wrenching update.

Re: poignant

[thecon12]

I'm really glad you can see Erica's position in all of this, I was a little worried people would see her as just being a cold hearted bitch. I think they're definitely scared to recognise what the significance of their night together is, and Erica's really feeling that confusion at the moment.

Thanks again for your always thoughtful and kind comments.

[iammeyouareyou]

A.MA.ZING, as always. You captured their emotions beautifully. I'm glad Callie's not giving up, and I'm hoping Erica will come around tomorrow. Maybe? Gold Star once again! :D

[thecon12]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) I'm really glad you liked this chapter. Callie's definitely not giving up on fighting for their friendship but Erica's totally confused at the moment so it could be a hard road for them as yet.

[vinjii]

That was bloody amazing. And these two should really quite making me want/need to get a shrink.

[thecon12]

Haha they really do have enough issuses for a shrink I think. Thank you for your comment :D I'm glad you liked the second chapter.

[spotlesssky]

this is a great story!
I especially like the friendship memory flashing part, it's so bittersweet!
Can't wait for an update!!!

[thecon12]

Thank you :) I'm glad you liked the flashbacks, I really wanted it to be clear just how meaningful their friendship is and why that makes the morning after that much harder for them to deal with.