(Drabbles) When the heart is crying, it sometimes feels like dying; teardrops fall like rain

[theclockiswrong]

비밀 (Secret) | G
Kyuwook/Ryeowook
An unrequited love struck down by the rain.

I want to know if it's okay for me to put my arms around you and hold you close to keep you warm. But you're smiling up at me. I'm okay, your eyes say. You're shining brightly even in the gloomiest of days and I'm unable to find the words to say to you. My heart trembles, but

Comments

[saya19]

Wow. I really like your writing style. It's beautiful.
I really like both but the first really hit me, it was really nice. I love that...it's like clear and unclear at the same time. I like the little discriptions of shoulders and just little details like that. The second was good too. Short but effective.

Thank you. Hope you write more.

[theclockiswrong]

Thank you :) I'm always in favour of writing things with a bit of vagueness in them so that the emotions can feel themselves in. Effective, yes? ^^

[saya19]

Yes. I love vagueness in writing although it can be difficult if you go over or under the right...amount(?). That sounds wrong but oh well. Yes, I like the way you write it. Effective.

Hope you write more Kyuwook and Henwook too (if you have the time and are willing). They're my two favourite pairings <3333

Thanks. Sorry about the little blah.

[theclockiswrong]

I rely a lot on the reader's individual understanding of the story. Leaving a vagueness will let them interpret it the way they feel it should be without having me say too much (: Thank you :D

Haha, of course I'll write Henwook and Kyuwook! They're my OTPs too! ^__^ <3

[cherrybombb]

dudeeeeee where have you been I missed your stuff like crazy ;__;
<3 I love these two, especially 'memory' it's short but it says so much =(

anyway, cute mood theme lol xD

[theclockiswrong]

I've been hiding ^^;

Thanks, heh~ I've been doing a lot of drabbles lately, no inspiration -__- I don't think they hold as much emotions as the longer pieces I've done, though :\

[giinnnzz]

lmao~ and the bracelet is from kyu~ *laughs*
*pulls u and ties you with rope*
dun go >W< kekekek~
we love ur writings~ *hugs*

demand for the continuation of dementia XP

[theclockiswrong]

I wanted to give him a ring actually, but I think it'd sound better if it was a bracelet ^^" And then I realized that Ryeowook does wear a bracelet in real life! ;O

Ah, Dementia... I actually have the second part written, but I don't find it nice enough to post, lol.

[giinnnzz]

lmao~ that bracelet that people speaking of XP
wonder from who he got it?? O.O?
kekek~ well post it ^^
I bet everyone will love it *hugs*
full of kyuwookers now >W<
but sadly i'm on hiatus XP
(dun go away till I'm back, bb >W<)
*tackles to bed*

[theclockiswrong]

In my mind, it's from Henry or Kyuhyun ^^

I won't post something I'm not fully satisfied with :C Maybe I'll take the time to revise it and then post it ;)

[ninprime]

oh wow o_O
the second one is kinda unique XD but damn, i love your writing on the first one >_<

aaah, relieved at your update. XDDD

[theclockiswrong]

Ah, unique? ;O Yay, you got it! I made it a bit vague this time so I wasn't sure if I got the message through XD Thank you! ^^

Lol, I'll try to update more often ^^

[thewindchime]

love these, esp the first drabble.
i'm amazed by how you manage to say so much with so little words (:

btw, i've been meaning to ask this for a long time. do you mind if i add you? for Kyuwook stalking, y/y? :D

[theclockiswrong]

Thank you! <3
I like writing my drabbles with some vagueness because your imagination will fill up the empty spaces on it's own :)

Ofc, you can add me! ^^ I'd be more than happy to add another Kyuwook fan back :)

[thewindchime]

thank you ♥
will add you right away, then :D