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[Fullmetal Alchemist] Timeless

May 19, 2007 17:52

Title: Timeless
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Rating: K+
Characters: Edward/Winry
Word Count: 488; Flashfic

( She plays a larger role in his life than he hoped she would. )

2007, fullmetal alchemist, flash fiction

Comments 3

dodgeroll May 21 2007, 04:11:46 UTC

Very nice. Touching and almost simple.

I like the last two parts the most because I think they both hold more of Ed's voice. ♥

clocklike May 22 2007, 01:20:02 UTC

Thank you so much, Arashi. ♥ Your feedback always means a lot to me.

glassbomb May 26 2007, 02:33:25 UTC

I liked this. My favorite part was: He doesn’t know what her favorite perfume is because he believes she never wears any, because she smells like sunburned hay-like home. It's so very Winry.

& this fic is very you- precise, poignant in a subtle way. It reminded me of how much I miss your writing.