[Fullmetal Alchemist] Unspoken and Unguided

Sep 05, 2006 22:10

Title: Unspoken and Unguided
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Rating: K+
Characters: Edward/Winry
Word Count: 533; Short short

[Written for alphabet_love; 09. indigo ink]

Minds like vines, thicker than ink )

fullmetal alchemist, short short, alphabet_love, 2006

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clocklike September 7 2006, 03:17:20 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad to have made you happy with a fic. :D

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cornerofmadness September 6 2006, 14:24:48 UTC
That was very sweet

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clocklike September 7 2006, 03:17:56 UTC
Thank you very much :)

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ex_kittu9 September 6 2006, 22:50:27 UTC
I've been meaning to comment for a few days.

So. Much. Love.

You really do this pairing justice--there's a fond element of realism here, without the two of them becoming tragic. I adore how Winry's becoming his diary. It's very matter-of-fact, almost exasperated affection.

It almost seems as though he’s trying to pass the time writing about stray cats and Al’s compassion for them. But that’s how Ed is; he kills time with words, the filling words that go nowhere. This is probably going to remain in my head for days--it's so Ed.

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clocklike September 7 2006, 03:19:07 UTC
Ahhhh! You flatter me so much with your comment *__* It fills my heart to be complimented on doing any pairing justice--especially Ed/Winry, if only because I'm so attached to both characters and their relationship.

Thank you a thousand times ^__^ ♥

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glassbomb September 7 2006, 01:56:28 UTC
It's all so very in character, and I've always loved the idea of letter-writing in fiction. I enjoyed this a lot.

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clocklike September 7 2006, 03:19:53 UTC
I'm very glad to know you liked! Thank you muchly ;)

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evil_little_dog September 7 2006, 11:44:43 UTC
Love it. Nice and spare but full of good story.

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