[Fullmetal Alchemist] Conjured Foundation

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Title: Conjured Foundation
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Rating: K+
Characters: Edward/Winry
Word Count: 659; Short short

[Written for 31_days; July 18, 2006 - Days of grass and sun]

Comments

[ex_kittu9]

Oh, you fabulous writer, you. ^_^ This is palpably real, almost painfully still (like contentment that you know has very short lifespan. I'm angsting this even though there is little or no angst. This is lovely. You rock).

[mai_kaihua]

I love it! It's nice to see a really plausible fic... I've read a lot of EdWin oneshots lately that just... ooh they make me so angry! Haha but not this one. It's sweet and they both seem wonderfully in character to me. But this part I loved so much:

He closes his eyes. The frown is still there. “I don’t fumble.”

Hehehehe. That's so Ed. I can just... picture Vic Mignogna saying that so well, but I can also picture it in the manga... which doesn't usually happen I suppose... Ah! But anyway yes this is lovely. :)

[evil_little_dog]

Such a sweet ficlet. It's weird to see Ed so restful, but it works for this story, very well. And his realization that soon he'll have to get up and move, and he and Al will continue their quest. Really nice.