This is another fic I've been struggling with. I finally had the courage to end it today. Dedicated to the three most loyal fans of Royai I know. :)
Title: Marked Injustice of Endearment
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Rating: K+
Characters: Roy/Riza
Word Count: 647; Short short
[Written for
alphabet_love; 10. jamais vu & dedicated to
zauberer_sirin,
kittu9, and
hamsterfactor]
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A discussion of chess and action of true loyalty )
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if you keep writing these two so well, i´m going to leave the buisness. you make me feel so cheap.
oh, Roy + chess = sex. absolute sex. it´s fic subject that can never grow old.
they’re a team of one, all seven of them (Black Hayate is not to be excluded, she tells to her mind clearly)
oh, yes. how i love you right now.
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No way! My Royai is nothing compared to yours or Kittu's or... you cannot quit Royai, ever! D:
I was worried that chess would be a bit too cliche, but couldn't resist the image of roy staying up late to play chess at night, with Riza watching him from a distance.
<33 Im so glad that you liked! You always flatter me, far too much.
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You are brilliant with these two. Though i have to warn you that i´m going to be very critical, whenever you write RoyAi, in terms of characterization.
The chess might be cliched but we can´t give it up. it´s just too sexy! i want to write a fic where one night, after making love Hawkeye asks Roy to teach her to play, so i can have an excuse to write naked!Roy playing chess. LOL Yes, i am that shallow.
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