[Fullmetal Alchemist] Marked Injustice of Endearment

Apr 11, 2006 17:31

This is another fic I've been struggling with. I finally had the courage to end it today. Dedicated to the three most loyal fans of Royai I know. :)

Title: Marked Injustice of Endearment
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Rating: K+
Characters: Roy/Riza
Word Count: 647; Short short

[Written for alphabet_love; 10. jamais vu & dedicated to zauberer_sirin, kittu9, and hamsterfactor]

A discussion of chess and action of true loyalty )

fullmetal alchemist, short short, alphabet_love, 2006

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zauberer_sirin April 12 2006, 00:46:32 UTC
(i have to declare that hamsterfactor is a far more loyal RoyAi fan than me -it´s an objetive fact, look at the sites she runs- so she should be put before me in that list)

if you keep writing these two so well, i´m going to leave the buisness. you make me feel so cheap.

oh, Roy + chess = sex. absolute sex. it´s fic subject that can never grow old.

they’re a team of one, all seven of them (Black Hayate is not to be excluded, she tells to her mind clearly)

oh, yes. how i love you right now.

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clocklike April 12 2006, 00:53:39 UTC
(When it comes to Royai, all three of you are jumbled in my mind, so I let my fingers type whoever came first! XD)

No way! My Royai is nothing compared to yours or Kittu's or... you cannot quit Royai, ever! D:

I was worried that chess would be a bit too cliche, but couldn't resist the image of roy staying up late to play chess at night, with Riza watching him from a distance.

<33 Im so glad that you liked! You always flatter me, far too much.

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zauberer_sirin April 12 2006, 00:57:44 UTC
(i figured as much, it´s just that it looks unfair, mentioning me first)

You are brilliant with these two. Though i have to warn you that i´m going to be very critical, whenever you write RoyAi, in terms of characterization.

The chess might be cliched but we can´t give it up. it´s just too sexy! i want to write a fic where one night, after making love Hawkeye asks Roy to teach her to play, so i can have an excuse to write naked!Roy playing chess. LOL Yes, i am that shallow.

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