Birthday fic

[marleybanana]

Title: on the long side of night
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[jennyagain]

jacoby transcends the boundaries so easily, doesn't he? that quick grin and those cheekbones pave the road to hell, i swear.

love the image capturing the contrast between ivory sheets and jacoby's skin, love that that's what troy's thinking about then, watching the light creep in and over him. it feels like troy is savoring this, knowing it can't last; i love that it gets shared with the reader, that intimacy.

love the picture of troy sliding back into bed with jacoby, sliding his arm around jacoby's waist, that image - the possession inherent in it - looks good on both of them.

[marleybanana]

that quick grin and those cheekbones pave the road to hell, i swear.
that, my friend, is a great understatement :D

love the picture of troy sliding back into bed with jacoby, sliding his arm around jacoby's waist, that image - the possession inherent in it - looks good on both of them.
I'd love to say that this is what I was going for, but, really, it kind of slipped in there all by itself, and I'm glad it all works :D I was certainly more concerned with the idea of two very pretty boys getting it on :D

[pynk_spyder]

It's mine! All mine! *evil cackle*

I feel sort of wrong, as a die-hard Rockies fan, doing this, but I also happen to be a fan of Jacoby and his amazing amount of pretty, so...

Haha, sacrilicious.

[marleybanana]

It is all yours :D

My conscience is slowly learning that it's perfectly fine to love Jacoby and hate the Red Sox...

[savvyfan]

//Jacoby constantly smells like warmth.//

Lovely, lovely line. In fact, the whole thing is just that - lovely. In a very non-schmoopy way. :-)

[marleybanana]

I totally meant to reply to this long before now, but...Thank you!

I loved playing with Jacoby :D