Fic: What Made Them Click

Mar 25, 2010 22:50

Title: What Made Them Click
Author: snorefest
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, they belong to Nickelodeon and associates. I am writing this for fun and not for profit.
Fandom: Big Time Rush
Pairings/Characters: Kendall/Logan mainly, Logan/Carlos, Kendall/Logan/Carlos/James
Rating: I’ll go with NC-17, but there’s no penetrative sex, just OT4 porn
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author: snorefest, fandom: big time rush

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_kirbylicious_ March 26 2010, 06:00:06 UTC
First comment? Haven't even read this yet, but may I just say that I think I love you for this? No, really.

Will read and come back with an actual comment. Precluding my brain not being broken of course.

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moonspoken March 26 2010, 07:48:07 UTC
:')

This is my first "First comment?" comment ever. It actually makes me weep with joy. When it appeared in my inbox I had to flail at Katybeth and Kelly on AIM for a little bit. ♥♥

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_kirbylicious_ March 26 2010, 16:35:23 UTC
Aww, well I'm glad it made you happy!! &hearts &hearts

Seriously though, this was INCREDIBLE AND HOT AND THERE ARE NOT ENOUGH WORDS TO DESCRIBE IT. Kendall drinking organic beer, Logan liking fruity girly drinks, Carlos playing Lady Gaga...there's nothing about this that isn't fantastic and just them.

I think it's made my brain fizzle out, and I really want to quote all my favourite parts but that would pretty much end up being the whole thing. But I have to say that Kendall calling Logan a "little whore" is possibly the hottest thing ever, and Logan finding making out with Carlos natural is fantastic because I kind of feel like they're all a little slutty for each other.

Please feel free to write more like this.

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moonspoken March 26 2010, 17:01:16 UTC
It made me so, so happy! ♥♥

Aw, I'm really glad you thought it was them. Thos little things were the most fun to think of and add into the story. And I mean, come on, Kendall would drink organic beer, and Carlos would be obsessed with Gaga.

Haha, aw, thank you so much! I agree, they're all a little (or a lot) slutty for each other. ♥♥

I just might!

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brachyura March 26 2010, 06:29:12 UTC
I think I've read this at least 9 times today. At least. But kejwaropeierjaopire I love it so much and you nailed it and *___*

Okay now I'm going to quote pretty much every line.

the only beer Kendall ever drank was the organic beer he picked up from some local brewery
HE'S SUCH A DAMN HIPPIE

it felt like home
I REALLY HOPE THIS WAS ACTUALLY A REFERENCE TO DEMOS AND NOT JUST ME REALLY REALLY READING INTO THINGS

Don’t they have parties in Texas?” Carlos had said disdainfully.
I SMILED SO BIG READING THIS AND I ACTUALLY DON'T EVEN KNOW WHY there is no point in me copying one word but I love that you threw in Logan's like of Radiohead

(who Logan both hoped would improve and also hoped would stay at exactly the same level of crappy dancing; his awkward moves were kind of totally adorable)
LOL KENDALL IS THE WORST DANCER EVER IT'S SO HYSTERICAL TO ME

and Logan forgot sometimes how young James was, because James carried himself like it didn’t matter. But Logan was reminded in moments like this, when James was half tipsy and staring at ( ... )

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brachyura March 26 2010, 06:30:22 UTC
god this is the longest comment ever i'm sorry

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moonspoken March 26 2010, 08:03:21 UTC
You are not allowed to apologize for long comments anymore because they are like my favourite thing to receive ever. They're like my bread and butter. They're like the Kendall's jizz to my Logan's mouth. Oh God, it's late. And people quoting my fic back at me actually makes me a lot more happy than it probably should. Also I love your icon, it barely even looks like him. Every time I see it I mean to tell you, and then I forget. Also I love your face.

Hahahaha, wow, I'm so glad that you're not sick of it after nine times. I feel like that's a pretty impressive number.

You know that Kendlol only ever drinks organic beer! In like environmentally friendly glasses. OH SHIT I should have had him smoking peyoti instead of weed.

And, it totally was a reference to Demos! I'm so happy that you caught all my references. It's because you are as much of an obsessive fangirl as me ♥ (PS all three tabs are still open, I don't even know how this is going to end ( ... )

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brachyura March 26 2010, 16:43:44 UTC
Oh god lol that was so terrible. And omg hahahahahaha that's so incredibly funny to me that you barely recognize him! That was back when he had such nice (albeit at the time it was a little long and gross) long dark hair and now he has that short dirty blonde mess. It's taken from like my favorite video ever because you have to be really really dedicated to lighting and not moving an inch to get backdrops on macs to work as well as he did. What a dork.

lmao Kendall would get so fucked up on peyote and be insanely philosophical and deep and shit

It will never end. Never. ps I was like *__* at that icon wejraperowiajreaopw why world why

I'm sure by the end of the season they will all be shamefully humming Rent or Wicked or something songs to themselves in the shower thinking FUCK YOU CARLOS while really actually enjoying it lol. Ps I meant this in a totally chaste way but it somehow didn't end up turning out that way ( ... )

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ruavain March 26 2010, 15:38:03 UTC
Oh.

My.

God.

I LOVE YOU AND I LOVE THIS AND HOLY FUCKING SHIT WAS THAT EVER AMAZINGLY DELICIOUS.

I am pretty sure that Kendall calling Logan a little whore is a fetish for me now. I just, that, just... yes, please.

Fuckingfuckfuckallfourofthemalluponseachotheristhegreatestthingthatcouldeverhappeninthisworldokay.

&hearts &hearts &hearts

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ruavain March 26 2010, 15:39:55 UTC
Okay I also just had to say that slutty!Carlos is also my new fetish and that I really loved how natural and precious the ending was.

kk.

*proposes*

&hearts &hearts &hearts

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moonspoken March 26 2010, 15:49:26 UTC
*accepts!*

Seriously, both those things are actually mine, and I was so scared to post this because I was like everyone is going to know my soul fetishes and be creeped out! But I'm so glad that you share them. This is why we'll make a good married couple. I have three wives though, this won't be a problem, will it? There's enough Erin to go around *leers*

And yeah, all four of them is the best thing that could happen in this world, and I'm pretty sure that it happens like five times every weeked. jkjkjkkkk

Ahhh! I'm so glad you liked the ending! Thank you!

♥♥

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ruavain March 26 2010, 16:35:23 UTC
There was certainly no need to be scared, SHARE THE LOVE. Because now everyone can know the joys of said fetishes and embrace them as their own!
And no, that's no problem, since I've got my own harem of husbands.

&hearts &hearts &hearts
&hearts &hearts
&hearts

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waltzing_mice March 26 2010, 15:52:08 UTC
adfjadfjdl;fjasd;lf ja;dfja;fja :D

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moonspoken March 26 2010, 15:55:14 UTC
You never ever fail to leave the comments that make me laugh the hardest!

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waltzing_mice March 26 2010, 17:43:16 UTC
There was no blood left in my extremities to type coherently!

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ruavain March 26 2010, 16:36:11 UTC
omfg that's the greatest icon ever.

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garnetice March 26 2010, 18:15:10 UTC
Geegjpdkahpdgphjdpej ( ... )

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moonspoken March 26 2010, 18:30:14 UTC
That's a good noise! ♥♥

Aw, thank you! That is a great compliment. And oh my goodness, you have no idea how happy it makes me to have converted someone to Team Carlos! I love him so much, I don't even know. I mean, all the boys have a special place in my heart, of course. But, Carlos ♥. And he's totally underappreciated in fandom! So, yyyyaaaaaayyyyy!

Ahhh! Thank you! This:
I could see everything perfectly in my mind...
is such a huge compliment! Thank you thank you thank you! I'm glad that it painted such a clear image, and that it really worked for you! And, haha uh oh! I'll hope for you!

Thank you! The OT4 is actually so much fun to play with, how they all come together (lol! oops!) but still remain themselves, and how they make it work, I don't even know. And Logan totally is a manwhore for his friends!

Thank you so much! ♥

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