Aww poor you Isabel. I hope that didn't go down to badly for you :(
But this was quite bittersweet, filled with so many could have beens. adored it really haha. I think your character descriptions needed a little spacing out though? Like its a but cramped, words wise. Spacing is fine haha
Overall, this is nice and nrlyangsty but still bright and cute and oh so lovely haha
Oh it went fine. It was one of the more awkward moments of my life but we got over it. And later that evening we ended up having a throw the ball at each other fight. They're nice to see once in a while. It's mostly my friend (played by ChanYeol) that I can't take too much of. She's quite self centered when you talk to her (unlike ChanYeol who in this just talks too much). And the guy played by JongIn just really changed. But yay for once there was a purpose behind using my OTP lol
It was originately longer and I think I'll probably write a longer version of it, but you know word limit dammit
Thank you !! Glad you think so~ I was a bit unsure about it you see
ahhh this definitely fit the word 'awkward', sort of felt a second hand embarrassment from Chanyeol lol but I enjoyed reading, it'd be awesome if you did write a long version :o (though I ship kaisoo and kaiyeol both so hard so i'd probably die)
yeah, it was quite the awkward thing to be positioned in.
i'm thinking of writing one where after they leave kyungsoo thinks back to the good old days of the time they hung out and he still had a crush. but only if i can really get into the flow of it.
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But this was quite bittersweet, filled with so many could have beens. adored it really haha. I think your character descriptions needed a little spacing out though? Like its a but cramped, words wise. Spacing is fine haha
Overall, this is nice and nrlyangsty but still bright and cute and oh so lovely haha
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It was originately longer and I think I'll probably write a longer version of it, but you know word limit dammit
Thank you !! Glad you think so~ I was a bit unsure about it you see
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Thank you for reading! and commenting XD
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i'm thinking of writing one where after they leave kyungsoo thinks back to the good old days of the time they hung out and he still had a crush. but only if i can really get into the flow of it.
thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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