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kaiyote in theblackmonster

Fanfic: The 4400, The Best-Laid Plans.

Sep 14, 2005 11:19

The Best-Laid Plans.
Fandom: The 4400
Pairing: Rockstar!Shawn/Governor!Jordan
Rating: R. Or so.
Spoilers: Season 2, Episode 6.
Warnings: Slash.
Disclaimer: I don't own The 4400 or Popular by Darren Hayes.

Author's Note: Okay, first of all, please don't take this terribly seriously, because it's not supposed to be totally serious. And then second, ( Read more... )

character: (the 4400) jordan, character: (the 4400) shawn, #fic, pairing: (the 4400) jordan/shawn, .fic: the 4400

Comments 4

neverbelonged September 15 2005, 02:06:00 UTC

I love it! So.. oh so great. Loved it.

kaiyote September 15 2005, 02:31:42 UTC

:D Thanks! It was so much fun to write, too! :D

Good story! anonymous September 16 2005, 02:34:44 UTC

Hi, it's me, your biggest fan, sarahofearth (you know the spaztic girl that always reviews your stories first). Yes, I've read this story and am actualy commenting on it. What can I say? You got me hooked! But I stand by my last statement, I will not write my own Slash fic, I just don't know if I'd be very good at it, you know. Lol. Anyways. This was a great story. I like the beginning, the middle, and the end, the whole story rocks! I'm having a bit of a problem imagining Shawn with a blue goatee though. It seems kind of weird. I guess the goatee that he had at Tom's wedding is the one I'm supposed to be picturing? But Jordan was absolutely perfect, he had composure, he had the coolness, you got him perfectly cannon, bravo! His sister sounds like a real character though. I do that a lot to my sister, call her 'baby sister', boy does she get pissed, lol. Well, I'm kind of tired so I'm going to make this review (or comment, whatever you'd like to call it) a bit shorter than my originals. You must tell me if you have written any other ( ... )

Re: Good story! kaiyote September 16 2005, 02:47:48 UTC

:D Thanks. I'll probably get around to posting this on ff.net when I think people generally won't freak and go "OMG" 6,000 times. :D

xD Shawn's bandmate/friend person is the one with the blue goatee. Shawn was the just "normal" blonde one. ;D

:D Thanks! I wasn't sure how well I was doing Jordan, because mainly I just stick with more Shawn-centered stories. ;D But you probably already knew that.

I think I based my character Cynthia mainly off of Jordan and another character from another TV Show... Who is named Cynthia. But man, that Cynthia is one cool.... person. *cough*

xD Whatever's in my memories for theblackmonster is what I've posted so far, anything else is just stuff that I'm working on that I need to edit and everything.

Thanks! :D I've had a long time to work on my "skills" for graphic-making. I've been doing it for around... 6 or 7 years now, so it's been awhile ( ... )