Dec 13th fic prompt

Dec 13, 2011 17:18

Title: When the world we've made is nothing but a drone
Rating: PG
Characters: Runner, Molly (Trucker)
Disclaimer: characters don't belong to yours truly. Title taken from Sara Watkins.
Warning: None. Set before the events of the movie.
A/N: Written for sardonicynic who gave me the prompt: Trucker : Runner + Molly- with this ring I thee wed (do you, darling, ( Read more... )

the gift of fic, i wrote a fic, tis the season

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sardonicynic December 14 2011, 01:11:32 UTC
Oh, Jesus.

Bat, ow. Owie-ow-ow, this is so achy-perfect. Augh, you have smashed my heart to smithereens here with Runner -- he is so hopeful about everything, and that makes the reality of what's become of his relationship with Molly all the more heart-breaking.

He legit thinks they're doing okay. He's convinced himself, and he just wants to take her to the reunion and have a good time.

And the way it dawns on him -- that she's embarrassed, that she's ashamed of him and their life together -- is so awful.

(Though I can't blame Molly; she's the one having to face the truth, while Runner paints over the cracks and calls it a Picasso.)

I can hear this entire argument between them, and see the dishwater hitting the damaged tile backsplash, and just.

Ahhhh, my HEART.

And that title. Oh, Bat. I love your brain. <333 Thank you for this -- I wasn't sure what direction you'd run with this prompt, but I knew it would be stellar. Spoiler: I was right.

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thebattycakes December 14 2011, 20:57:34 UTC
Augh, this is so meeean! But your prompt had me flailing from the beginning so I knew when I got to writing the result would crack my heart ( ... )

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