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We've Only Just Begun, 2/2

Jul 15, 2007 22:35

See part one for details - should just be a post below!

The evening was not getting off to the most fantastic of starts. They had agreed to meet at six, it was a quarter 'til seven, and Radek was nowhere in sight. It wouldn't have been the first time in his life Rodney had been stood up, but he would never have expected it from Radek. Hence his ( Read more... )

teyla, radek, rodney, atlantis, 5x5, john, rodney/radek, ronon, carson

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dirty_smudge July 16 2007, 10:44:45 UTC

Pigeons are exactly the kind of pet Radek would have. Or maybe a snake.
This was such a sweet and imaginative first date and I can't wait to read more.

audreyscastle July 16 2007, 16:36:13 UTC

Eww, snakes! *runs* Heh, thanks....really appreciate the feedback--totally needed it today! :) (And, yeah, after hearing Radek mention pigeons, I can't see him without them on Earth.... ;-D)

ankhmutes July 16 2007, 11:02:44 UTC

Perfect! The poor guys, such a rotton first date! though now i have to go back and reread the rest, in the proper order. 8-)

audreyscastle July 16 2007, 16:38:54 UTC

Hee, I aim to please. :-D Thanks! ...definitely looking forward to being able to being able to work in these series a bit more....

nonesane July 16 2007, 21:36:03 UTC

Yes, the first date! That was such a perfect disaster. The poor boys, hopefully they'll have it a bit easier from now on (though not too easy, a few obstacles are always entertaining, at least of us readers *grin*)

Love this and still eagerly awaiting more stories from this universe!

audreyscastle July 16 2007, 21:50:14 UTC

Thanks so much! :) Twas a lot of fun creating disasters for the boys....but they're gonna have a fun life together....

comnena39 July 17 2007, 02:52:35 UTC

So very cute as always!
I loved Carson with his whole 'I never thought I'd have to tell you to be yourself...' speech.

And the boys, one disaster after another but they made it!
I was worried I admit that Rodney (even though this Rodney is much more self-confident than canon Rodney)would end up being a bit of a git. So glad it was all things that went wrong, not them going wrong.

And the puddy-tats! *huggles them all* I miss my two so much when I hear of the chaos the Siamese cause, and Alfred snuggling into the bed... bless!

audreyscastle July 17 2007, 04:57:34 UTC

Thanks! Always love hearing from people who've been following the series, seeing reactions... Really glad you liked it! It's really a fun place to write in, so I'm glad the readers find it that way as well....

scifinut July 17 2007, 04:18:10 UTC

Wow. Just read all of The Bar AU so far. And I'm in love. This story, all of 'em. So. Damn. Cute.

Really, that's a good thing. I promise.

audreyscastle July 17 2007, 04:54:50 UTC

Heee, thanks--I'm glad you like! :) It's a very fun world to play in, so I definitely hope to be back with more....