Screeeeams this fic is A+++ and GOLD. This was so beautiful. I cant word my feels..
okay..
I lost all the words I was supposed to comment here coz I was spazzing on twitter about this fic and flailing. I really really really love your writing style
I first read this on BAE and re-read it just these past two days and it was so awesome to pick up on all the little clues and moments went right over my head the first time around. I have a sneaky suspicion that the more you read this story, the better it gets :)
I just wanted to highlight this exchange, because it is, for me at least, so indicative of this whole epic story:
“Making wishes is stupid.” Chanyeol rolls his eyes, “It’ll never happen.”
“What, so you believe in destiny but not wishes?” Baekhyun asks teasingly.
“It’s different.” Chanyeol replies and Baekhyun can practically hear the pout in his words. “Destiny, you can observe. Wishes you cannot.”
“And how does one observe destiny?” Baekhyun laughs good-naturedly, turning to glance at Chanyeol. When he lays eyes on the solemn expression on the others face, he stops.
“It’s just--” Chanyeol stops himself, his eyebrows slightly furrowed in thought. “Patiently.” He finishes after a second’s pause. “How do you observe destiny? Patiently.” This exchange is so beautiful, so
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Okay well I have no idea how you managed to make it through 66k in the first place. Much less for a second time around ;; but thank you for taking the time to reread this :'D
I'm not going to lie, that's probably one of my favourite parts of the story (it's one of the ones that I actually included in the original vague outline of story ideas lol). It's also another one of the lines that hints at Chanyeol's immortality and I'm happy you picked up on it :)
Thank you so much for commenting and reading (again), it's really nice to know that you enjoyed my story (◡‿◡✿)
Omg omg omg I love this so much!!!!!!!! This is so amazing!! I literally read this in one afternoon, I could not stop! I had my suspicions about Chanyeol when the deer ran off and when he was eating a "cherry popsicle". I'm absolutely in love with this. I just love that every part was relevant to the plot and everything was tense and I just had to keep reading to find out and just ugghhhhh. I can't even begin to explain how amazing I think your writing is. (๑•́ ω •̀๑) Thank you so much for writing this! You're a truly incredible writer. ♡(˃͈ દ ˂͈ ༶ )
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This was so beautiful. I cant word my feels..
okay..
I lost all the words I was supposed to comment here coz I was spazzing on twitter about this fic and flailing.
I really really really love your writing style
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I just wanted to highlight this exchange, because it is, for me at least, so indicative of this whole epic story:
“Making wishes is stupid.” Chanyeol rolls his eyes, “It’ll never happen.”
“What, so you believe in destiny but not wishes?” Baekhyun asks teasingly.
“It’s different.” Chanyeol replies and Baekhyun can practically hear the pout in his words. “Destiny, you can observe. Wishes you cannot.”
“And how does one observe destiny?” Baekhyun laughs good-naturedly, turning to glance at Chanyeol. When he lays eyes on the solemn expression on the others face, he stops.
“It’s just--” Chanyeol stops himself, his eyebrows slightly furrowed in thought. “Patiently.” He finishes after a second’s pause. “How do you observe destiny? Patiently.” This exchange is so beautiful, so ( ... )
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I'm not going to lie, that's probably one of my favourite parts of the story (it's one of the ones that I actually included in the original vague outline of story ideas lol). It's also another one of the lines that hints at Chanyeol's immortality and I'm happy you picked up on it :)
Thank you so much for commenting and reading (again), it's really nice to know that you enjoyed my story (◡‿◡✿)
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I'm absolutely in love with this. I just love that every part was relevant to the plot and everything was tense and I just had to keep reading to find out and just ugghhhhh. I can't even begin to explain how amazing I think your writing is. (๑•́ ω •̀๑)
Thank you so much for writing this! You're a truly incredible writer. ♡(˃͈ દ ˂͈ ༶ )
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