I think Baekhyun needed someone like Joonmyun in his life, someone to keep on understanding, or trying to, and someone to keep on loving him despite him pushing people away.
First, I’d like to say that I really enjoyed the inclusion of female characters. Obviously with RPF slash fic involving boy bands, women don’t show up very often… but I liked the depth you gave to Taeyeon and Soojung, in particular. It’s something I enjoy seeing in fic, and I thought you used them to your advantage in this story. :3
Baekhyun’s conversation with Amber in part 1… heartwrenching. Poor kid. :( I like how you set up that there was some kind of problem between Baekhyun and Joonmyun, and now we’re starting to discover what it is - he’s not out. Which is a huge issue, and it’s easy to see why Joonmyun might have been hurt when Baekhyun brough Taeyeon to his art exhibit. If I were him, I’d feel crushed that my boyfriend was trying to look straight, too.
It’s good that Baekhyun is able to confide in Taeyeon, though, that they stayed friends even after breaking up and she kinda knocks him over the head when he does things he doesn’t realize are inconsiderate. Everyone needs a friend like that, I think.
I noticed that in fics, too, that there are rarely female characters and I wanted it to be as realistic as I could make it. I don't think any guy doesn't have any female friends, even if they're not that close. I'm happy you liked that and I'm happy that you thought I'd given Taeyeon and Soojung depth. Also, I'm glad that you thought the fight between Baek and Joonmyun was authentic. ;;;
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment!!! <3
oh baekhyun (つД`)ノ ohhh baekhyun for how you are treating joonmyun, oh baekhyun for how you are treating yourself and then YOU HAVE THE GALL TO FUCKING CHEAT ON HIM!!! this is such a fucking mistake when people do this, it always comes back to bite you in the arse. I feel bad for both of them. i can only imagine what it's like for people to be stuck in this kind of situation where they are uncomfortable with coming out to family/friends and in public. it's such a scary thing to deal with i would imagine, and joonmyun is such a sweetheart as he waits for baek to be ready.
He turned gay, got into a relationship with someone he would never deserve, hurt that person and screwed up even further. How can he answer that question without wanting to disappear?I just want to smack him and then hug him at the same time, my heart is shattering for him {{p´Д`q
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Mara!!! You know what, when I was writing the sex scene, I immediately thought of you because you're the first person I think of when I hear top!Baek. :))
Again, I'm glad you liked this despite the almost triggering parts. Thank you so much for reading!! <3
HAHAHA it doesn't happen often and when it does i want to screammmmm, frances this was really great though, this fic is a massive monster of a thing, well done well done (~ ̄▽ ̄)ノ♥ *rolls all over you*
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I think Baekhyun needed someone like Joonmyun in his life, someone to keep on understanding, or trying to, and someone to keep on loving him despite him pushing people away.
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Baekhyun’s conversation with Amber in part 1… heartwrenching. Poor kid. :( I like how you set up that there was some kind of problem between Baekhyun and Joonmyun, and now we’re starting to discover what it is - he’s not out. Which is a huge issue, and it’s easy to see why Joonmyun might have been hurt when Baekhyun brough Taeyeon to his art exhibit. If I were him, I’d feel crushed that my boyfriend was trying to look straight, too.
It’s good that Baekhyun is able to confide in Taeyeon, though, that they stayed friends even after breaking up and she kinda knocks him over the head when he does things he doesn’t realize are inconsiderate. Everyone needs a friend like that, I think.
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I noticed that in fics, too, that there are rarely female characters and I wanted it to be as realistic as I could make it. I don't think any guy doesn't have any female friends, even if they're not that close. I'm happy you liked that and I'm happy that you thought I'd given Taeyeon and Soojung depth. Also, I'm glad that you thought the fight between Baek and Joonmyun was authentic. ;;;
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment!!! <3
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ohhh baekhyun for how you are treating joonmyun, oh baekhyun for how you are treating yourself and then YOU HAVE THE GALL TO FUCKING CHEAT ON HIM!!! this is such a fucking mistake when people do this, it always comes back to bite you in the arse. I feel bad for both of them. i can only imagine what it's like for people to be stuck in this kind of situation where they are uncomfortable with coming out to family/friends and in public. it's such a scary thing to deal with i would imagine, and joonmyun is such a sweetheart as he waits for baek to be ready.
He turned gay, got into a relationship with someone he would never deserve, hurt that person and screwed up even further. How can he answer that question without wanting to disappear?I just want to smack him and then hug him at the same time, my heart is shattering for him {{p´Д`q ( ... )
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Again, I'm glad you liked this despite the almost triggering parts. Thank you so much for reading!! <3
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