The great confusion of Antonio Fernandez Carriedo

Dec 23, 2009 01:42

Title: The great confusion of Antonio Fernandez Carriedo
Author: TheBackwardNile
Beta:  Getawaycar_x
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Antonio/Lovino, Alfred/Arthur, Francis, Gilbert
Rating: PG 13
Warnings: Bad language (exspecially Arthur's), alcohol, mentions of Antonio's "dreams"
Summary: Antonio is having problems, and talks about them to the wrong ( Read more... )

fanfic, writing, aph, hetalia

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xxfurryfirefoxx December 23 2009, 01:51:44 UTC
I liked it! Poor, oblivious Antonio, don't go braking up my OTP! Dx Lol, please write a sequel~ <3

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vivecka December 23 2009, 03:56:16 UTC
”Oh?” he said, confused. ”You're here.”

”Yes, I am,” Alfred agreed.

”Oh shit,” Arthur cursed.

just how drunk is he? haha.

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allyoucaneater December 23 2009, 13:19:53 UTC
The ending is too abrupt, but I like it :)

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peridottears December 24 2009, 02:35:30 UTC
Oh, Antonio~ Totally disregard Gilbert and Ludwig, Arthur and Alfred...and the less I say about Francis, the better. -Eye roll-

Lafayette, Kosciusko, the volunteer army...von Steuben...so, is Galvez being cleared? :D -Shot for horrid pun-

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getawaycar_x December 24 2009, 12:17:05 UTC
Ttly not sitting at the computer on Christmas eve <.< Ignore the date above the comment, 'tis inaccurate D8
Merry christmas >.>

Like I already said, this fic is really funny, and I can't remember ever betaing something this quick XD Next time I'll take more time and care, even though I think the betaing turned out okay.
I remember loling so much when you told me the concept. I can totally see it happening too.

Guh, I'm leaving now before daddy dearest catches me using the computer on Christmas D: He woke us up by singing Holy Night. Loudly.
Just wanted to make a comment. I'm looking forward to betaing the next part when you're done with that too =)
Kissus >3

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