Warren Ellis comments on a bit of Midnighter #14

[ipsumlorem]

I'm not sure how many of you read

Comments

[shanejayell]

It's kinda sad, reading that. *lol*

[candyflosskillr]

e. Definitely e.

I had to re-read the first few pages about three times until I noticed Mindy behind them. *hangs head in shame*

[nique]

I'm going to guess that the latter scans (with Jenny) made no sense? That's the bit that confused me, too...

[loqia]

I second this one. I can see what the dialogue is trying to do -- be all mysterious and beaty-around-the-bushy and oblique -- but it's just... done terribly. There's an art to writing that kind of dialogue without making it sound like some pen-happy editor hasn't just come through and redlined all the exposition, and this writer does not have It.