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Nov 02, 2010 18:07

Title: What Empty Is - Chapter Two
Fandom: Glee
Rating: R
Word Count: 1430 this chapter // 2600 overall.
Genre: Drama/Angst
Summary: When Mike goes missing, the glee club flounders. Will realizes the horrible truth about what became of his student. Rape warning.
( Sometimes we have to put the needs of others first )

carl, rape, will, mike

Comments 6

serendie November 3 2010, 01:52:41 UTC

That's what I wanted, some Mike/Will fatherly/son like bonding. I think Will sees these Glee kids as kind of his surrogate children since he doesn't actually have any of his own, and this was just adorable. Heartbreaking, since you write the emotion so damn well, but I'm really enjoying this story and your writing talent!

theauthor2010 November 3 2010, 01:53:59 UTC

I agree with you there. He's definitely an excellent father figure. He has his weaknesses as a character which I hope to explore here but he's an awesome paternal figure to his kids.

:D Thank you! So glad you're enjoying so far.

serendie November 3 2010, 02:00:59 UTC

I'm so glad you're a Will fan! It seems like most of this fandom sees him as some sort of pedophile. Sure he has his bad points, like every character on the show, but at the core he cares so much about 'his' kids,

Oh I'm one of the anons that commented in the actual meme thread, but this is a beautifully written story so I have no concern about having to remain anon now. I just like to stay anon on the more graphic type of fills. Keep up the great work!

theauthor2010 November 3 2010, 02:04:54 UTC

He bugs me, I'll admit, but I think the cool thing about the show is that everyone has real flaws. Clueless, sure, but pedophile? Seriously ><

Aw thanks so much! I'm glad you did!

omiss_anono November 3 2010, 16:03:16 UTC

At least it's all out in the open now and Will knows what happened and the fact it's pretty much his fault. Will he tell the others though, or keep Mike's privacy? And what is Emma going to do when she finds out her boyfriend did this to one of their students. I love how you wrote Mike and Will though, especially the stuttering... that made the entire exchange even more sad.

theauthor2010 November 4 2010, 00:47:39 UTC

Aw thanks.
I hoped that wasn't too over the top. I just noticed that I personally tend to stutter really hard when upset or stressed, even though I don't in a normal situation - so figured it worked.

I can't wait to continue.