title : i'd give my whole life just to see it
pairing/fandom : mini/alo, past one-sided mini/franky and mini/nick, minor hints of alo/nick, alo/everyone friendship
rating : R - drinking, drugs, very little sex, a lot of swearing
word count : 5304
summary : Alo finally gets to have sex with Mini! There's only one issue - he's not great at it
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It fits canon, right? It's canon for the next 40 weeks.
I'm so glad people like my characterization of Alo, because he's so hard. I'm tackling Mini next, it will be from her point of view.
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Thank you for filling my prompt, bb!
I liked how you merged the gang's advices with their flaws. Hilarious.
There was not a single photo of her family, unsurprisingly.
I feel like Alo would pick up on small things like this. He's not stupid. I also liked how you didn't magically cure Mini of her eating disorder just because she was dating Alo. That feels more realistic.
Anyways, great fic hun. You always add humor to things which is fun to read.
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I really want Alo's arch next series to be him being smart? lol that's a horrible way of putting it, but I'd love for him to get good grades and go to a good university.
In Ontario.
In South-Western Ontario.
I'm glad you like the humour. It's my personality. It's really hard for me to be serious in general and I always feel like those parts are insincere.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
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Yay!I was waiting on this and it was awesome, as expected. Funny, Sweet and the characters were on point. In my mind Alo is a Sex God, but I love this all the same.
I would totally keep shagging to Cutting Crew. Hey...the song is sexy. It's the keytar that fucks it up, lol.
I love that you added that Matty's staring creeps him out. It creeps everybody out, but Franky, lol.
And I totally hate (love) you for making me even consider Malo.
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To be fair to Alo, this was his first time. After this go, he was perfect and Mini had three orgasms in one night.
Embrace Malo! Multiship for the summer, bb!
Thanks for reviewing!
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