hold our tongues and fill our lungs
taemin/sulli ft. kai and krystal
pg-13, 3137w
-- for naomi, remix of
onceuponataem's heartbreaking
give us a little love. i set out remixing
there comes the soft rain (the first fic of yours i read ;;), but it wasn't turning out the way i wanted it to (read: it was really bad) so i scrapped it and it ended up like this. i
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tbh its been a while since ive read a fic, but oh my god your writing is so sososoosos osos oso sooo good!!!! the way the words are flowing, im like literally so honoured someone so awesome remixed my fic, can i bow down? im gonna bow down. i literally want to quote the whole thing and say "FAV PART" lmao bc honestly that whole first part EVERY SINGLE SENTENCE is amazing. i love the "i want to die" coming up so often, some sort of poetic justice when taemin is finally realizing he kinda doesn't want to die
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OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS
"Whoever digs us up thousands of years later will know we loved each other"
IM LITERALLY!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?
Of course, he doesn’t know this - the main character of a funeral is never quite…knowledgeable about these things - but Jongin does, in his black dress shirt and trousers.
OMG THIS LINE IM SMILING SADLY IDK???? but then im here also imagining jongin in his handsome ass black dress shirt and trousers and taemin im sorry ur dead but jongin is handsome
I want you to find this girl for me, Taemin told him last week or so, a hesitant smile on his face - tired but, Jongin had to squint to catch it, happy.
happy prince :(((( i hate when a character dies when they are just finding happiness AND NOW IM ANNOYED HE DIED IM SO JDOAFIJDSWAOFJeaw;fa
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honestly how dare you
She looks up because she assumes - even though his lungs were probably shit and his liver not much better - that he went to heaven.
HOW. DARE . YOU. tbh imo everyone goes to heaven in the end. random: but my mom told me a story once about this lady who had done a lot of bad stuff in her life and she thought "ah im going to hell", then she is walking one day and she sees a dog dying bc he is thirsty, so she takes her shoe off and puts it into a well and gives the dog some water. who knows if the dog lived after that or not, but my mom says bc of that one act of kindness, the lady went to heaven. sorry random story but its my favourite story. i think similarly for taemin, bc he handed jinri the nicotine, even tho he doesn't if jinri will live afterwards, bc of that one act, i think he will go to heaven :)
He finds some of Taemin’s beers in his refrigerator. Only one out of the six pack has been touched. I’m ( ... )
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