you wrote it prettily. your portrayal of soojung's personality is exactly as what i had in mind when i wrote this so i'm very happy about that. and i love the fact that there's not much dialogues except for the last part.
thanks a lot mish! i purposely didn't recommend you any fics to remix so that you're not restricted to what i chose, but you happened to pick my favourite :)
THANK YOU IM SO HAPPY YOU LIKED IT ;___; but yeah I tried to keep it minimal dialogue - I figured it was a very contemplative mood anyway, especially given krystal's position. And I struggle with dialogue enough as it is ... I honestly really loved writing this tbh, the setting of the countryside is so aesthetic and nostalgic, I'm really happy I wrote this!
oh man the weeds part ;_; this is also one of my personal faves from shida ♥ i think you did a good job portraying how soojung wants to stay but needs to leave and it's all just really conflicting huhu poor kaistal x_x
THE WEEDS PART WAS MY FAVE TOO haha I learnt that weeds are literally plants that are unwanted (so when flowers invade a plot of farmland = weeds) - I'm actually so happy that I thought of it and that you enjoyed it too! But yes poor krys having to choose so early :'(
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I tried hard pls dont kill me I hope you like it
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you wrote it prettily. your portrayal of soojung's personality is exactly as what i had in mind when i wrote this so i'm very happy about that. and i love the fact that there's not much dialogues except for the last part.
thanks a lot mish! i purposely didn't recommend you any fics to remix so that you're not restricted to what i chose, but you happened to pick my favourite :)
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but yeah I tried to keep it minimal dialogue - I figured it was a very contemplative mood anyway, especially given krystal's position. And I struggle with dialogue enough as it is ...
I honestly really loved writing this tbh, the setting of the countryside is so aesthetic and nostalgic, I'm really happy I wrote this!
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the weeds part ;_;
this is also one of my personal faves from shida ♥ i think you did a good job portraying how soojung wants to stay but needs to leave and it's all just really conflicting huhu poor kaistal x_x
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