sleepy towns | #tac ficmix

[mekimigure]

kaistal for shida kirakirashahida, a mix of another time, another place
2370 words (of incoherence from soojung's pov)

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[mekimigure]

spot for kirakirashahida
I tried hard pls dont kill me I hope you like it

[kirakirashahida]

WHY WOULD I KILL YOU i love it ;___;

you wrote it prettily. your portrayal of soojung's personality is exactly as what i had in mind when i wrote this so i'm very happy about that. and i love the fact that there's not much dialogues except for the last part.

thanks a lot mish! i purposely didn't recommend you any fics to remix so that you're not restricted to what i chose, but you happened to pick my favourite :)

[mekimigure]

THANK YOU IM SO HAPPY YOU LIKED IT ;___;
but yeah I tried to keep it minimal dialogue - I figured it was a very contemplative mood anyway, especially given krystal's position. And I struggle with dialogue enough as it is ...
I honestly really loved writing this tbh, the setting of the countryside is so aesthetic and nostalgic, I'm really happy I wrote this!

[kurdoodle]

oh man
the weeds part ;_;
this is also one of my personal faves from shida ♥ i think you did a good job portraying how soojung wants to stay but needs to leave and it's all just really conflicting huhu poor kaistal x_x

[mekimigure]

THE WEEDS PART WAS MY FAVE TOO haha I learnt that weeds are literally plants that are unwanted (so when flowers invade a plot of farmland = weeds) - I'm actually so happy that I thought of it and that you enjoyed it too! But yes poor krys having to choose so early :'(