harajuku of taipei | #TAC ficmix

Jul 01, 2015 01:01

harajuku of taipei
lay/hani
g, 3158w
seven years dreaming of metaphors that no one else would appreciate

-- for sapphy | remix of kisoap's reflection symmetry and the caffeinated mind for #TAC ficmix (prompt: lying under cherry blossom trees)

Today, Yixing is thinking. )

fandom: exo-k/exo-m, #circleficmix

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kurdoodle July 1 2015, 08:02:45 UTC
spot for kisoap

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kisoap July 3 2015, 05:51:14 UTC
KIND OF LOSING MY SHIT RN I'M SO EXCITED ( ... )

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kisoap July 3 2015, 06:02:46 UTC
"Never mind, I don't know what I'm doing."
you guys are meant to be together please be together.

She's about to turn around when the backs of their hands accidentally rub against each other, causing both of them to blush.
SO CUTE!

the distance between them laden with electricity, blood cells in arteries in the heart of Taipei at eight o'clock at night.
i love this line so much too! it just gives a really vivid image in my mind about the whole scene! you are a genius, hannah ;;

them sipping boba and eating popcorn chicken
ngl, i got super hungry after reading this line lol

I think you're my 100% girl."
"I don't care if you're 50% perfect and 50% imperfect or 1% perfect and 99% imperfect, you're 100% for me,"
THIS WHOLE SCENE THOUGH. I LOVE IT. it's just an awesome way to expand the reference and like??? how romantic is that line ;;;;
THIS IS THE 100% PERFECT FIC FOR ME.

Two hours later, they part ways at the same crosswalk, silhouettes of unblossomed cherry trees waving goodbyei really like how you used the cherry blossom tree ( ... )

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kisoap July 3 2015, 06:14:39 UTC
the next few scenes -- i love the parallelism from heeyeon's "seven years later" in taipei to her first visit! and the parallelism between her and yixing's scenes ;;

In the end, people and cars and buses are just going in all directions, she decides. Millions of blood cells, coursing through the system, and she is one of them, floating in the abyss, two and a half feet off the floor.
again, what a great image!

They meet at a crosswalk at ten minutes after noon,
BRB PICKING MYSELF OFF THE FLOOR.

Yixing, feeling a little lonely but mostly okay
i love how you described this feeling! it's a really fleeting line, but it's just so...accurate? or very true to that kind of feeling, when everything's supposed to be ok and everything is ok, but something is off because you're alone. idk, i love this line. i love everything about this!!!

it is the guy in front of her for just five seconds as he passes by that makes her breath get caught in her throat.
C R Y I N G

He's about to turn around when the backs of their hands accidentally rub ( ... )

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sooriforever July 1 2015, 08:18:41 UTC
SCREEEEEEEEEEAMING wait brb

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kirakirashahida July 1 2015, 16:05:19 UTC
OMGGGGGG this is beautiful!

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kurdoodle July 1 2015, 17:06:08 UTC
sobs thanks for your moral support while i was desperately trying to figure out what to remix and how to do it ♥

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p_swizzle July 6 2015, 22:21:26 UTC
this is really beautiful. quite moving, actually, and it sort of reminds me of murakami's style (lol). one of my favorite fics i've ever read !!!

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kurdoodle July 8 2015, 05:42:07 UTC
"one of my favorite fics i've eve read" wow can i cry??? awhh thanks poonam for always supporting me ♥ ((my underling lol jk but seriously)) luff you!

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p_swizzle July 8 2015, 16:21:35 UTC
ily too

but seriously i didn't have words to describe this fic and sapphy's comment up there described basically everything. i wish i was able to piece together something but i literally didn't know what to say after i read it. this fic really is amazing <3

yes i am your underling don't deny it

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oldcaravan July 10 2015, 12:15:47 UTC
wow

woah

the setting, the character, and how their first meeting and seven years after that is parallel is amazing. And all the metaphors are beautiful <33
this story is on point and kinda unique. i don't know the perfect words to describe my feeling about this fic, but I do know that I really really love this <333

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kurdoodle July 13 2015, 06:19:45 UTC
awhh thanks for loving this ♥ i have a thing for metaphors x_x honestly kudos to the original writer of the fic that i remixed for coming up with such a brilliant au and concept apsdohf;alksdjg;sd

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