dɪsɪnˈtʃɑːntɪd Part II

[theangelisrafel]

Fandom: My Chemical Romance
Rating: Overall this will be NC-17, but the chapter is PG
Pairing: Gerard/Mikey

Summary: MCR moves into the Paramour mansion. Mikey has some mixed feelings about the move but he tries to push them aside and attempts to adjust to his new environment. It doesn't take long before eerie and strange things start happening. The

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[goose_gir1]

So I came here from the community page, and then I finished the chapter and accidentally went back to the community page only to find a new chapter! This pleases me. x)

Seriously, though, this is unnervingly cool. Especially the parts that may or may not have happened--- I really feel Mikey's uncertainty in it, and I can see the blue. I sort of imagine it sticking to Mikey's skin, even when he's out of the room.
Just so I'm clear, their rooms are joined by the bathroom, so it has two doors inside it?

(The only thing mildly throwing me off is Lindsey, 'cause Gerard wouldn't have known (~known) her yet, in RL. Then again he wouldn't be pseudo-psychic IRL, either, so I'm not sure why that bugs me.)

[theangelisrafel]

I guess I should have mentioned that I'm fucking with continuity in this. There's not a lot that I could find about personal lives during this time, which I can understand that they don't want things like that to be shared, but it makes it hard for me to write certain characters.

I kind of wanted to add her because I think she would make a good outside character, as Alicia is for Mikey. I hope it's not too off putting to you.

Thank you for the feedback too~

[theangelisrafel]

Thank you =D I'm glad you like it, as I'm always a little uncertain of how others will interpret it.