Comments | theair_thesun: Fic exchange: Love Her

lady_carrie in theair_thesun

Fic exchange: Love Her

May 25, 2010 20:34

Title: Love Her
Author: lady_carrie
Rating: T
Summary: Bella and Edward are on the way to their honeymoon, and Jacob is convinced that things will not end well. He fears for Bella's life and he'll do anything to make sure she comes back home alive.

Written for: restlessxpenPrompts: Edward and Bella are on Isle Esme for their honeymoon. After Bella has finished getting ( Read more... )

one shot, fic exchange

Comments 6

restlessxpen May 25 2010, 21:16:12 UTC

Absolutely perfect! I'm so glad you chose that prompt, as it was the one I really wanted to see done! I loved that you had Jake following Alice around, pestering her, to add humor to the story. The ending left me very satisfied. Thanks for writing this!

lady_carrie May 26 2010, 17:03:04 UTC

Your welcome, thank you for writing mine, its perfect.

The more I reread this fic, the more I want to make it into a chaptered fic.

lsjcandy September 14 2010, 21:00:10 UTC

I wouldn't mind at all :)

iridiscentwings May 26 2010, 03:14:16 UTC

This was awesome.

JacobxBella, with a dollop of angst, a pinch of humor, and the final line? Absolutely amazing, not to mention oh-so true, too. Yay, now Bella can finally be with Jacob, just as it should be! <33

Love the title and this story. You did really well on staying true to all of the characters; which makes it all the more of an enjoyable read.

Great job all in all!

lady_carrie May 26 2010, 17:03:32 UTC

Thank you very much. :)

iridiscentwings May 26 2010, 23:40:07 UTC

No problem, thank you for sharing such a lovely story. Also I'll havta concur with the above poster -- Alice & Jake's interactions really cracked me up. XD & omg if you make this into a multi-chaptered story I will so totally read and comment faithfully!! No pressure or anything though, haha. ;D