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May Drabble Challenge

May 02, 2011 13:04

May Drabble Challenge
If you missed the hilarity from last month, go check out that post now. Then come back here and participate in this month's prompt:

A Most Perfect Place
Write a drabble where the setting is vital to the story. It could be a church, a garage, a cemetery, a cliff, a meadow, a bus stop, the moon, or any place you'd like. Just ( Read more... )

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Kate and her Uncle Seth - K. mellyfrisco6 May 2 2011, 19:34:20 UTC

About the name...I think the Royal Wedding got to my head a bit too much. This isn't beta'd at all ( ... )

Re: Kate and her Uncle Seth - K. lsjcandy May 2 2011, 22:23:26 UTC

Kate and her Uncle Seth turned their head around to look at Jacob and Bella sitting on their bench, lost in their own little world that involved Bella’s big belly and lots of cuddling.
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Loved this, Kate too, by the way. I don't know why, but Kate seems like such a name Jake and Bella would choose for their daughter.

Re: Kate and her Uncle Seth - K. willow2883 May 3 2011, 01:09:49 UTC

That was so cute. I thought it was a Blackwater fic though till the end. Very sweet.

Re: Kate and her Uncle Seth - K. mellyfrisco6 May 3 2011, 13:37:46 UTC

Because of the "Uncle Seth" thing? I was writing my main fic before and Seth is like Bella's brother in it. That's why. And thanks :)

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Little Trip to Heaven - K exquisite_ugly May 3 2011, 15:58:39 UTC

562 words. Yes, I cheated, but close enough, right? haha ( ... )

Re: Little Trip to Heaven - K needjakenow May 5 2011, 01:03:14 UTC

Never really been a fan of reading in second person but it really worked here. I loved this so much. That last line of Jake's had me laughing so hard.

Re: Little Trip to Heaven - K exquisite_ugly May 5 2011, 18:49:25 UTC

Thanks :) I don't typically write in 2nd person, but I did it once before for a drabble and kind of enjoyed it, so I thought I'd try it again! And I totally think Jake would say that. ;)

Re: Little Trip to Heaven - K purelyamuse May 14 2011, 17:23:20 UTC

This was an interestng take on perspectives. Jake is telling the story to me. I'm Bella. Hm, interesting. Sure, let's practice baby making. :)

Love Pangs? by Purelyamuse Rated K purelyamuse May 14 2011, 17:12:12 UTC

Love Pangs? By Purelyamuse ( ... )

Re: Love Pangs? by Purelyamuse Rated K ladyofspain7 May 16 2011, 21:02:29 UTC

Hmn . . . A little BR humor there. I have three girls , but only one of them would appreciate this like I do. LOL.
At least Jake has a picture in his BR, I have to wade through an ocean of books!