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August Drabble Challenge

Aug 13, 2011 18:16

August Drabble Challenge
Setting new records of lateness all over the place. Make sure to go read the entry's in last month's angsty challenge over here. Then come back and participate in this month's prompt:

Word Association

Bellow is a group of words. Read them over, and write about what comes to mind. Your drabble doesn't have to contain all or any ( Read more... )

drabble challenge

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Come Back Home - 523 words - G peskywhistpaw August 18 2011, 17:40:14 UTC

It went a little over, sorry. I couldn't bear to edit. :(One of the things Jacob knows and loves about Bella is that she always comes back. She’s left every winter (except for every other Christmas), but turned up every summer that he can remember, smile shy as she stands just a little behind Charlie; her eyes are always unsure when they see everybody, but when they find Jacob, they start to dance. (Which makes Jacob start to dance, and his sisters groan ( ... )

Re: Come Back Home - 523 words - G runningsissors August 18 2011, 18:30:33 UTC

apart from me loving this, which I do, I can just comment on how extremely happy I am to see you writing Jacob/Bella again!

Re: Come Back Home - 523 words - G peskywhistpaw August 18 2011, 21:11:07 UTC

Aww, thank you! ♥ I've been kinda getting back into Twilight stuff lately, so I've been itching to try my hand at writing them again.

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Old Worlds | T | 335 runningsissors August 18 2011, 19:18:56 UTC

He knows it’s stupid. He knows that really in the grand scheme of things, it won’t make a difference. But he can’t help but hope she notices, and sees what he’s trying so desperately to tell her ( ... )

Re: Old Worlds | T | 335 peskywhistpaw August 18 2011, 21:21:38 UTC

Oh. This is like. Sad and sweet. I feel so bad for Jake, how desperate for Bella to notice - and realize how she feels. My favorite part is:

He could scream it at her. Could say it in a million altered tones every time she comes to see him, but it wouldn’t change a thing. He could breathe it into her skin every time she takes shelter in his embrace, with her small arms around him so tight.

*sniffles* So gorgeous.

Re: Old Worlds | T | 335 runningsissors August 18 2011, 23:07:29 UTC

aww, thank-you! I originally didn't mean to make it as angsty as it is now, so I'm not quite sure what happened there.

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Learning to love the snow Word Count: 419 ihatecanonbella August 19 2011, 02:52:00 UTC

Bella tried to keep her mind of the current pretenses. They were in his bed her shirt pulled up right below her breast, she'd refused to take it all the way off like he'd suggested, and her pants however had come off leaving her in her underwear ( ... )