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Long Affairs and Silly Dares
Rating: PG.
Pairing: Andrea/Emily.
Fandom: The Devil Wears Prada.
Summary: Emily takes on a dare.
Disclaimer: Characters aren’t mine.
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Emily didn’t know why at the time, but suddenly she felt as though she needed to take this into her own hands, save Andrea from Christian… or Christian from Andrea. She didn’t know which. )
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Bare is the only one I have marked out.
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The only problem I had was that at the end I was a little confused. Was it a flashback type reaction; stating what was now, and then this is how it lead up to now? Even looking back, I'm still not quite sure on this. Maybe making that transition a little bit more clear would have helped me enjoy this one a little bit more.
All in all, a wonderful story. Please write more, because I think you have an amazing talent, and I can't wait to see where you go from here.
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I realized that too, when I reread it - but I decided to leave it, because I wanted people to form their own thoughts on whether it was a flashback-type story. I guess if it's too confusing, though, it's hard to enjoy. (But just for the record, no, it's not - "the very first time," to me, meant that this was the first of many.) Thank you for the feedback. :)
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You can find a few Andrea/Miranda stories at femslash_today - under August 2006, I believe.
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Anyway this was a completly wonderful fic I loved that it was from Emily's point of vie and I love the whole idea of Emily-and-Andrea versus Emily and Andrea.
Thanks so much for sharing!
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