Over The Rainbow Chapter 1

[the_wilsons]

*Warning: Some "strange" outfits, and minor language* (It is not really bad, but I like to make my stories so everyone can read them!

Comments

[marijuly12]

great plot... loved the eve dress... I really hope to see more of this, and of course of the wilsons

[the_wilsons]

Thanks and don't worry, as soon as my cc is working again the wilsons will be up and running :)

:D

[mirandacourt347]

This is amazing :D:D:D
I feel sorry for Evie; Gabe is evil!
I love the plot, it leaves you wanting to know the next part! And I'd definitely keep writing it this way, if you enjoy writing it this way :)
Keep writing!

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[the_wilsons]

Thanks so much! I can't wait to read more of yours too!

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[mirandacourt347]

Thanks!
Can't wait for more!

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[the_wilsons]

Thanks :)

[bcintron32]

Poor Eve! Hope things work out for her! Great story so far! =)

[the_wilsons]

Thanks :) and don't worry things will get better for her :P

[storyteller1010]

Awesome! I like it! The plot is great, because it's not that common. And the way you write is good too ;)

[the_wilsons]

Thanks there will be a lot more unique storylines too :)

[alexavo_thesims]

Great story and great plot! :D Just one thing, have you thouht of writing it like, "hello bob" said bill instead of Bill - hello bob. Just wondering, lol and ignore my stupid example!

[the_wilsons]

Haha thanks and yes I was actually planning on doing that and that is what I am doing in the future it is just my computer was acting slow :P - this is bob LOL