Him

[the_wild]

*meep*

Most personal piece in a long while... hope you enjoy...

Comments

[_xratedromance]

i'm not going to quote because this feels too personal a piece for me to feel comfortable disecting it and commenting on certain sections. it's a window one is required to look through and appreciate the entire room beyond, as opposed to picking out those things which immediately catch their eye

[the_wild]

it meant that reading this was like discovering a part of your history i was pretty much unaware of beforeI always wanted to tell you about Barnaby... I almost wrote about him in that last letter... he's just... God, there are no words. He just is

[_xratedromance]

you're welcome xxx

[the_wild]

Wow!!
Thanks so much, Jenni, my love!!
♥ xx

[savage_midnight]

Okay, I absolutely love this. This is the kind of writing that really hits me -- the real stuff. I recognised bits of myself in there, bits of a guy I fell for years back. You captured that sort of... fantasy effect that you get when you're completely infatuated with someone, but you managed to keep that edge of hurt to it. The only word I can think of is poignant, and it doesn't seem to really sum it up. I just loved it. I can say no more =p

[the_wild]

This is the kind of writing that really hits me -- the real stuff.
It's what I was aiming for so I'm glad it worked!! ;)

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was a bit worried about this. It's so honest and I don't usually do that but... I don't know... he got into my head and I needed to get rid of him in the only way I knew how!! *g*

Anyway, thank you muchosly, my dear!! ♥ x

[savage_midnight]

... he got into my head and I needed to get rid of him in the only way I knew how!!

I know exactly what you mean -.-

[blue_emotion]

This was just...

I honestly don't know what to say right now. No comment I could ever write could do this justice so I don't feel I should even try. This moved me in ways I can't describe Di, it stung me to read yet it also had this frozen beauty to it that the pain couldn't erase, it's just a stunning piece ♥

[the_wild]

Wow...

Thanks so much, Miss Jess...
That comment has seriously floored me. You are far too kind!! *g*

♥

[debedoo]

I loved this piece. God some men are bastards and we always fall for them

Sigh...

[the_wild]

Tell me about it... Glad you liked it!! ♥