[The Fault in Our Stars Rewrite] Prosaic Novas: Chapter 1 - Summit Plummet

[the_whittler]

Chapter 1 - Summit Plummet

Comments

[quicksilvermad]

I liked how you added the scene with Gus carrying Hazel's oxygen tank. And how you had him include Isaac and Monica to the movie "date." Overall, it feels more genuine than the original.

Thank you

[anonymous]

Including Isaac and Monica would make up one flaw between The Fault in Our Stars and Looking for Alaska: shallow supporting characters. Or more specifically, one-dimensional female characters given identity by male observation

[delyhisb]

Great job! Much better than the actual book! Are you going to continue this? I hope you do, it's WAY better than the actual book itself...