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LJ Idol Topic #26c: Open Topic

May 22, 2011 03:02

The Ducal Council Chamber of Volterra was a sea of grave and stony faces ( Read more... )

lj idol, fiction

Comments 16

nyxocity May 25 2011, 17:18:00 UTC

Oh, excellent! I didn't see the ending coming.

the_vernacular May 25 2011, 18:12:29 UTC

Oh, I'm glad you said that. I wasn't sure if it was too obvious from the way I set it up.

nyxocity May 25 2011, 18:14:04 UTC

Well, I figured the thief was really Nunzia, but I didn't see her turning down his proposal and especially didn't see her using immaculate conception to get herself out of lock up!

the_vernacular May 25 2011, 18:18:18 UTC

Oh, yes! You're supposed to guess it's Nunzia, that's good!

wyliekat May 25 2011, 20:12:35 UTC

I love the desperate, haunted feel to this one.

hosticle_fifer May 25 2011, 23:32:44 UTC

Didn't see the twist coming. Great job!