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electrictoes May 17 2009, 12:19:05 UTC
Ooh, intrigue! And drama! And Jack!
And all on a Sunday, too.

Wonderful.

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the_tenzo May 17 2009, 19:37:48 UTC
We didn't get our acts together enough to have the next chapter finished in time for Tuesday, so hopefully the intrigue, drama and Jack will be enough to get you through to next Tuesday.

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fid_gin May 17 2009, 13:11:44 UTC
Yay!!!! Happy birthday me!!!

I really, really enjoyed this chapter. Everyone's just acting perfectly...Jack sort of sadly stalking Donna, the Doctor getting all bitchy about alt!Ten 'cause he's worried about him (awwwwww. *smush*), Rose remembering how anger was her coping mechanism after being separated from the Doctor, Donna being too effing smart and awesome to fall for the Injured Woman Scam. I love it!!! Can't wait for more! :)

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mitashade May 17 2009, 18:13:25 UTC
I was gonna post down below, but you pretty much said everything I want to, so I'll just say "what she said!"

Brilliant.

And happy birthday! :D

*offers cupcake*

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fid_gin May 17 2009, 18:50:14 UTC
Thank you! I'm having a wonderful one so far, waking up to the latest chapter of this fic was certainly the way to start it right!

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the_tenzo May 17 2009, 19:38:55 UTC
No one does sad stalkery like Jack "You have a hand in a jar" Harkness!

I'm glad you liked your wee gift today and hope you have a splendid birthday!

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unfolded73 May 17 2009, 13:54:48 UTC
I love that Donna doesn't get lured into the trap, assuming that's what it was. Very nice way to subvert the stereotype.

And as the birthday girl said, there was much to love in this chapter. I can't wait to see how it all ties together.

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the_tenzo May 17 2009, 19:41:39 UTC
Yep, you read it right! Because sometimes that "I'll save you!!!" impulse can do more harm than good.

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prynne12 May 17 2009, 14:20:20 UTC
Oh, Rose is going to kill them BOTH.

She wondered how much of an arsehole he'd acted in the aftermath of their separation in the lever room, if this is how his concern for others expressed itself.

A big one, Rose. A very big one.

Though, 10 meters? That's quite a distance...I wonder what's gone horribly, horribly wrong...

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the_tenzo May 17 2009, 19:42:32 UTC
You'll find out next week! It involves a naked Doctor, so there's that. Alas that we can not provide a visual aid.

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morrighangw May 17 2009, 14:34:20 UTC
Why am I NOT surprised that Jack would have "I'm Too Sexy" as his ringtone? XD

So much wonderful plottiness! I can't wait to see how it all fits together. The Doctor is in for a smack when Rose finds him.

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the_tenzo May 17 2009, 19:43:43 UTC
The ring-tone gag was all Chi's doing. I'm rarely that cheeky!

Thank you for reading! :D

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