Comments | the_tenzo: Held in Trust: Chapter 18

the_tenzo

Held in Trust: Chapter 18

Feb 20, 2009 15:26

Title: Held in Trust (18/?)
Characters/Pairings: Duplicate Tenth Doctor/Rose, alt!Donna, various Tylers and Motts, and several OCs
Rating: Most chapters Teen (Adult chapters noted as such)
Series: Part of the Morris Minor 'Verse
Beta: ladychi [It's ladychi 's birthday today and all she's getting from me is this chapter which she put the hard work of betaing in to. ( Read more... )

character(s): ten2/rose, fic series: morris minor 'verse, genre: action/adventure, rating: teen, fic: held in trust, length: novel, genre: sci-fi

Comments 11

ladychi February 20 2009, 20:42:32 UTC

Yay, it's up, and the dialogue passages were about six billion times better in this version!

I love the bits about the handbook, too! Wonderful job all around. Two thumbs way up!

rosewarren February 20 2009, 20:56:49 UTC

Really, it is all in the handbook -- I've read it. Well, I say read. I burned it. But I flipped through it a bit beforehand.

Ha! I KNEW there was a handbook!

spikewriter February 20 2009, 21:09:23 UTC

Yay! Another chapter just in time for lunch. And why am I not surprised that the Doctor knows what's in the handbook -- or that he burned it?

np_complete February 20 2009, 22:18:01 UTC

Oh! I really want to see what's next! I'm very interested in what the Doctor means by saying he was, at least in part, the cause of this system.

aroniwen February 21 2009, 02:35:12 UTC

I love just how doctor-y the Doctor is in this chapter. It`s perfect... in this universe sometimes you see the man who`s almost human and then we get this: I love it!