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the_tenzo

The One True Free Life (23/26)

Sep 14, 2008 00:20

Title: The One True Free Life (23/26)
Characters: Alt!Ten/Rose, and everyone else I can cram in to the Alt!Verse, plus several OCs
Rating: Teen
Spoilers: Everything
Disclaimer: It would be a very different, and possibly quite upsetting, world if I owned these characters. For the sake of the world's children, I don't.
Summary: When Rose and Alt!Ten ( Read more... )

character(s): ten2/rose, genre: action/adventure, fic: the one true free life, length: novel, genre: romance, fic series: morris minor 'verse, rating: adult, genre: sci-fi

Comments 15

i_palimpsest September 14 2008, 04:56:55 UTC

oh dear I hVe a horrible feeling I know what the psionic thingy is.

the_tenzo September 14 2008, 11:47:12 UTC

We shall see!

i_palimpsest September 14 2008, 11:52:56 UTC

Well I rather hope I'm wrong to be honest

torn_eledhwen September 14 2008, 05:14:54 UTC

No TARDIS, but it's not like they really need one, is it? Loved the action in this chapter.

the_tenzo September 14 2008, 11:48:01 UTC

No, they don't when 10.5 decides to get truly Doctory. He's so sexy when he plays at Action Hero. UNF!

lesmisloony September 14 2008, 06:30:38 UTC

Oh! I could actually SEE the action like an episode! All I needed was a smashing Murray Gold score to back it all up! Brilliant!

the_tenzo September 14 2008, 11:48:39 UTC

That's good. I have discovered that I actually haaaate writing action sequences, so I'm glad at least someone wound up liking it.

soniced_up September 14 2008, 07:47:26 UTC

AWESOME action sequence. Had me on the edge of my seat. Love how relaxed the Doctor is with all this. He's in his element. In fact I'd say it was just what the doctor ordered.

Great job.

the_tenzo September 14 2008, 11:49:32 UTC

I think as far as the Doctor is concerned, either one, running is good because when you're running you can't think too deeply. It's always the thinking that gets him in trouble.

catsfiction September 14 2008, 09:45:49 UTC

Very well planned and well written action sequence, with all the characters very well realised. Love seeing the old team at work - and you bring Central London vividly to life as well.

the_tenzo September 14 2008, 11:46:51 UTC

Erm, well that's good about the London thing, given I haven't been there for over 15 years, and when I did live in the UK we almost never went down there (I'll explain any discrepancies by pointing out that this is alt!London, after all!). But, google earth has been my good, good friend while writing this fic.