Well I finally finished it...hopefully its good. I feel like it is but isnt at the same time and yet im just proud of myself for finishing something...*sighs*....anyways...hope those that read the first part of this like this part...Its nice to actually have something complete...not that my image writing isnt fun...I gues I just like it when I sit
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I almost leave the comment to ask you about it but I thought over and decided to wait until you ready.
And WOW! this chapter is really worth the wait.
IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL WRITTEN, SO WONDERFUL STORY AND SO PERFECT with every words you used, every images you wrote and every emotionals you expressed.
When you wrote your slash fic, not only the images were hot but beautiful too, like the artist paint the beautiful-naked body with the lighting and surounding.
This chapter were different. You wrote more about their emotions and your insights were so deep. And It's a very long chapter. You should feel very proud of yourself and go out to celebrate.
Here are some cookies to go with your wine.
Thanks you so much for a beautiful, wonderful, perfected long chapter. <3.
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again thank you my dear...<3!
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But dammit! I don't have time to read and appreciate it properly now since I have to be up for an early shift tomorrow and it's late and I'm tired...but I'll be back, hopefully tomorrow evening so I can properly adore it!!
*hugs*
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It's beautiful and painful and erotic and sensual and scary...so wonderfully written and beautifully structured and the images you created in my head...AWESOME!!
This is a very worthy addition to the Fang Family Archives!! A perfect tale of how the leaving of Alex affected his Childe and Grandchilde; how he suffered and how the dream of their deaths gave him the strength to fight back...and your charaterisation of Fangy Caroline is incredibly well done!!
Frankly, pet, I LOVED IT!!! It's magnificent!!
*hugs*
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thank you for the comment my dearest...it means a lot to me...*<3 and hugs*
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Maybe the time it took was a good thing...it certainly didn't suffer in any way, shape or form!!! It was stunningly beautiful and heartbreakingly sad!!
And you're welcome, sweetheart! <333
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