Fic: Dark Side of the Sun (TDK/Leon)

[the_summoning_d]

Title: The Dark Side of the Sun (4/?)
Rating: R
Pairings: Undecided
Warnings: Violence, character death, language...and people may have cause to take issue with my portrayal of our good Commissioner...
Disclaimer: 'The Dark Knight' and 'Leon' belong to various people who aren't me. And apologies to the almighty Pterry for nicking the title of one

Comments

[snapini]

Ha, I can perfectly understand Gordon's desire to get away from Arkham as quickly as possible. I think you described it so well -

Footsteps on the cold tiled floors echoed from the walls, lights buzzing faintly in their safety cages of wire mesh. Faintly in the distance someone was screaming.

Creepy, claustrophobic, depressing, disturbing....I could go on, but yeah, that's how your description of the place came across to me!

Anyway, great chapter, and I really love your characterisation of Gordon.

And while filling out requisition forms wasn't his idea of a good time, he'd rather that than staring at his bedroom ceiling with the empty half of the bed stretching out to fill the dead silence in the room.

That sentence broke my heart. Poor lonely Gordon....

[the_summoning_d]

*nods* Poor Gordon. I don't know why I'm so mean to him.
I'm glad you liked the chapter, especially the bits you quoted - I was thinking I maybe had too much dialogue and not enough narrative.

[starwriterlv]

Its just getting better and better. I completely echo what the other commenter said....excellent.

One lil side note...hope you don't mind...but I got to say the moment in the film when he gets Joker...We go you son of B****....so reminded me on Stan...

[the_summoning_d]

Thank you :D

Oooooo good point. I hadn't thought of that before, but yeah. You can see him coming through a little bit...

[starwriterlv]

you're welcome.

:^D

[ladymurha]

I'm so glad I started reading this. It's really fab! I love the little hints of the Commissioner's life that we can see through his work and this little mystery you're cooking up. WRITE MORE, DAMMIT :D

[the_summoning_d]

o.0 Yes ma'am!

[museycaly]

Love how you've portrayed Arkham. So creepy!

Hope for more soon XD

[the_summoning_d]

Yay! Glad you like it ^^
More...well, there will bemore. Not sure when though.

[python07]

You've still got my interest. I hope you post another chapter soon.

[the_summoning_d]

I'll do my best :)