Whoa. So damn hot. At last Henry stops being so damn cautious and just goes with his feelings.
I don't often get chills reading a story, but when Henry went to kiss Johnny, I felt a chill go down my spine.
Very well written. Remember the scene between Johnny and Henry the night before the final sting. They are playing cards and Johnny goes to leave, and before he walks out the room, he and Henry look into each other's eyes as Henry stands in the doorway of the bathroom.
Re: At the movies - storygigletFebruary 9 2008, 18:33:37 UTC
*smishes you with hugs*
You know, Max, the water is fine, and the territory is largely virgin, and I'd sure enjoy other people writing fic about these fellas. No pressure, I just thought I'd mention. Now that you've got the writing mojo back.
That was very hot and sexy. The frustration they both are feeling,and the excitement of the stolen moments were really very vivid. And I also liked the image of the movie lights flickering.
You're welcome! I've been writing in a few other fandoms. But once I catch up on the chapters I need to post I will do at least one "Sting" fic. Maybe before if I get really inspired !
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The flickering light from the movie screen really worked for me as an image.
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I usually write Henry as more restrained than this, but... some days, a girl just needs some hot porn, you know?
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Whoa. So damn hot. At last Henry stops being so damn cautious and just goes with his feelings.
I don't often get chills reading a story, but when Henry went to kiss Johnny, I felt a chill go down my spine.
Very well written. Remember the scene between Johnny and Henry the night before the final sting. They are playing cards and Johnny goes to leave, and before he walks out the room, he and Henry look into each other's eyes as Henry stands in the doorway of the bathroom.
I can never see that scene the same way again!!
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They are playing cards and Johnny goes to leave, and before he walks out the room, he and Henry look into each other's eyes
Oh, that scene! So, so slashy! And Johnny bats his eyes at Henry. I love it!
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Love, max
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You know, Max, the water is fine, and the territory is largely virgin, and I'd sure enjoy other people writing fic about these fellas. No pressure, I just thought I'd mention. Now that you've got the writing mojo back.
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Love ya, max
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So... are you working on any stories at the moment?
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I've been writing in a few other fandoms. But once I catch up on the chapters I need to post I will do at least one "Sting" fic.
Maybe before if I get really inspired !
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