Decided to write, because I didn't know what else to do.

Oct 15, 2005 22:44

A man in a black suit walked breathlessly away from his black convertible. The sun was in its zenith, violating his body with scorching Ultra Violet rays. The sun was everywhere, and he could not escape it. His heart hammered as the anxiety thrived through his body, and dripped out his skin. Eventually he crashed into the the familiar wall outside ( Read more... )

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starlightmims October 16 2005, 07:00:35 UTC
Josh, your english amazes me Spaniard. I like the line "He could feel the tempo of his heart reverberate through the bricks..."
lize

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the_spaniard October 16 2005, 09:42:30 UTC
Too kind, too kind

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smileforsuzy October 16 2005, 12:52:20 UTC
i like this part:
"He took a step forward, and was assaulted by the smell of faint nostalgia."

don't you stop writing

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beautyinaction October 17 2005, 18:36:55 UTC
I love your updates.

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