Well, back by popular demand....

[the_spaniard]

Well, that's right everyone, I'm back. Here to bring some light into your bleak, and meaningless lives. Well what can I say about the last couple of weeks? They've been a lot of fun. Meeting new people, swimming at barton, camping, good times, and much more. It is sad, because so many of us will be separating. But thankfully, most of our friends

Comments

[beautyinaction]

very insightful...thank you.

[beautyinaction]

It doesn't really flow well... but besides that it sounds intriguing

Since only a dictionary definition will convince you, here it goes...

[the_spaniard]

All i want to know is who you are, and why you've gone out of your way to post all those comments(as for me,it is my livejournal, so of course i would respond). And a word of advice, before you start spewing out garbage like what you are doing is "constructive" i would first find out what it means.

Constructive Criticism

Definition: Citicism or advice that is useful and intended to help or improve something, often with an offer of possible solutions.

If you can't figure it out on your own, then here's some constructive criticism for you, get a dictionary, and start looking up the definition for things you think you know.

Re: Since only a dictionary definition will convince you, here it goes...

[beautyinaction]

I would say that the fact that your post doesn't flow very well is constructive that way you know and maybe you can fix it. That seems to fit very well the definition. I am sorry that you took offense to what I said because thats not what I intended, I just simply stated that I thought they were good ideas it just didn't flow well. Never once did I attack your charecter or your intelligence I just thought your writing needed improvement if you were actually thinking about developing it more. Like all drafts they need to be edited. If you can't see that then I'm sorry.

[eib]

I've missed your entries. Soon we together will rule Texas. KICK ASS 2005