Introduction

Oct 12, 2005 13:40

Entry One

Howard Liles crept down the hallway of the Greased Wheel, a small inn in a nowhere village. He had finally located his quarry and had waited for an hour in the night when the person would likely be asleep. He was a bounty hunter. The best money can buy around here.

A large assassin’s guild had put a hit on a man, all the way from Thay. ( Read more... )

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elvenavariel October 18 2005, 02:42:03 UTC
^_^ What a great story. You're really talented SammySam-kun... now time to be picky!

A large assassin’s guild had put a hit on man
You can figure it out.
Howard unsheathed his short sword and plunged it into the figure lying on the bed. Howard knew just by the feel of it that something was wrong.
The word "Howard" begins both sentences, the second one should start with He. ^_^
hair was lose
loose
He dawned those
donned

^_^ Edit finished. Gotta start drawing now. That lounging Kiro pic is too good to pass up.

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the_south_star October 18 2005, 03:24:12 UTC
I fixed them. Thanks for the help. I had found quite a few other typos in there. Another thing that bugs me is that I forgot to explain how me managed to dodge the crossboq bolt ^_^ Not even Kiro can move at light speed to play those games. Oh well, another somethig for future posts I suppose.

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