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the_silver_sun

Fic: Past Imperfect. (3/7)

Dec 17, 2009 20:17

Title: Past Imperfect. (3/7)
Pairing/Characters: Jack/Ianto, team.
Rating: R
Warnings: Torture/interrogation scene in later part. (No sexual elements to torture.)
Summary: Waking up injured and with no memory of the past few days is only the start of Jack's problems as part of his forgotten past comes back to haunt him. A/N: Set during in series ( Read more... )

character: captain jack harkness, character: toshiko sato, series: torchwood, pairing: jack/ianto, character: ianto jones, fic type: fic, rating: r, fic series: past imperfect, character: gwen cooper, character: owen harper

Comments 17

twistoftate December 17 2009, 23:11:00 UTC

I'm loving this story! I read the first part when you first posted it...somehow missed the second part, so I just caught up. Such an interesting storyline. And your characterization is wonderful. Can't wait for more! :)

the_silver_sun December 20 2009, 14:17:06 UTC

Thank you :) Glad the characterisation works, as I've not writen Jack's POV for quite a while.

I hope to post the next part before Christmas.

remuslives23 December 18 2009, 02:20:46 UTC

I was just thinking last night that I hadn't seen a notification from you for a little while!!:) I am really enjoying this fic. Your characterisations are fabulous and I envy your technical detail. Looking forward to the next chapter.

the_silver_sun December 20 2009, 14:21:58 UTC

Posting is still a little erratic due the baby not always wanting to let me have any writing time. Glad the characterisations work.

My techical detail is often more a case of just sounding confident about saying stuff, that it always being accurate - like the teleport device, I don't think that there has been any confirmation in Torchwood or Doctor Who teleport devices work or if they are traceable, so I just made something up that hopefully sounded like it would work.

I hope to have the next part posted before Christmas.

owensheart December 18 2009, 08:43:53 UTC

Oh I love this, getting better and better.

Cant wait for more.

the_silver_sun December 20 2009, 14:22:26 UTC

Thank you :) I hope to have te next part posted before Christmas.

badly_knitted December 18 2009, 10:56:14 UTC

Poor Jack! I hadn't realised before that his coat is still missing! Such a silly detail for me to fixate on, but he must feel undressed without it. I love that Jack hadn't even realised he hadn't told them about the house. The state he was in when he was found, it's hardly surprising he didn't say anything then. He wasn't thinking clearly. At least they have some clues now! Hopefully they can start putting the pieces together. =)

the_silver_sun December 20 2009, 14:51:28 UTC

Jack lost everything he was wearing the morning he disappeared. He's trying to get everything that happened and is still going on straight in his head.

More pieces of what is going on will start to be put together in the next part, although how it's done might still be a surprise.

I'm hoping to get the next past before Christmas.

missthingsplace December 19 2009, 08:25:50 UTC

I;m absolutely loving this, i get the feeling Jack's memories might filter back very slowly and i hope he gets his coat back.

the_silver_sun December 20 2009, 14:25:15 UTC

Glad you like it :) Jack's coat and his memories will both make an appearance before the end of the fic.