Fic: Things Hidden (2/2) Complete.

[the_silver_sun]

Title: Things Hidden
Rating: pg13
Characters/Pairings: Gwen, Jack/Ianto,
Word count: This part 4000 of 7500 total.
Warnings: None apply
A/N: This was written for, but wasn't finished in time for, Redisourcolour #26. Words: bandy, broken, shuffle, kaleidoscope. Phrase. “You're being nice. You don't have to be.”

Summary: A tourist’s film footage

Comments

[angstosaur]

lovely ... I liked the haunted house set up and the unfinished business in need of resolution after Exit Wounds… I always wondered how Ianto’s injuries would fare after being buried in rubble in Fragments and I am glad that it was Gwen that noticed and that her actions brought the two back together again … lovely story, I really enjoyed reading it :-)

[nancybrown]

:) I really enjoyed the plot of this.

[veritas6_5]

Marvelous! I loved how you made it work itself out, and Gwen's forcing Jack to look at the chaos, and help Ianto to deal with it. She seems much more self-sufficient here than most people can write her, and I really thank you for that. In fact, I'm really liking most of the fics with this trio, and I feel that this one is one of the best!

[lawsontl]

Just another day at Torchwood :)

Satisfying conclusion, and some GREAT lines, especially:

"Even if it means nearly being killed by a centuries old fear eating smoke alien."

and

“Hey! Just because nobody invited you to the ugly bug ball doesn't mean you get to take it out on my team.”

[fide_et_spe]

Great plotty little story. I loved the idea of an "emotivore". Shame they don't exist, would be a handy way to deal with unwanted emotions. A bit killy maybe.

All really in character and I really liked Gwen in this, shame she didn't do more of this in canon.