Fic: Just Jack.

[the_silver_sun]

Title: Just Jack
Characters/Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: pg13
Word Count: 550
Contains: D/s (Psychological aspects)
Summary: Sometimes Jack needs to remember to learn to trust.
A/N: The original version of this was my last fic for Kink_las and the one which I got voted out with in round eight. (And if I'm honest I deserved to get voted out with as I hadn'

Comments

[evalentine99]

I am not sure why you are so critcal of this its excellent on so many levels.

[the_silver_sun]

Thank you :) It's not really this version that I'm not happy with, it was the original version for Kink-las found here http://kink-las.livejournal.com/9818.html This is why I went back to it and re-wrote a few lines of it so that it's what's now posted here.

[evalentine99]

I loved it edgy and dark.

[too_beauty]

beautifully heartbreaking!

[the_silver_sun]

Thank you :)

[mcparrot]

Intense and painful. Very well written. It made me ache.

[the_silver_sun]

Thank you :)

[fiwen1010]

Fantastic story, really deep emotion that's brought out by the starkness of the context
Gxxx

[the_silver_sun]

Thank you :) glad you liked it.

[badly_knitted]

This is beautiful. After everything Jack has been through, it must be difficult for Jack to trust anyone but himself, but he's gradually learning that he can trust Ianto.

[the_silver_sun]

Thank you :) It's the trust aspect of the D/s that, even when I am writing sex fics that interests me most. Especially when Jack is in the sub role, as a lot of things in his past would make complete trust in somebody else difficult for him.