Fic: Getting It Right

[the_scary_kitty]

Title: Getting It Right
Pairing: John/Elizabeth UST
Rating: PG
Spoilers: First Strike
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: MGM/SyFy own it. But if I owned it, I'd treat it better than they have.
A/N: Written as a personal challenge for the GW Sparky thread's episodic post-a-thon.
Summary: AU extended ending to First Strike. Picks up right where the episode leaves

Comments

[momm2five]

Oh! Now that's how it should have gone! I love the pink moon!

Very sweet, love Liz chewing out Ellis and sending him home with his tail between his legs!

[the_scary_kitty]

Heehee, thanks! I like the pink moon, too. I wanted it to be different from the single white moon over Lantea or the five moons over the new planet in Seasons 4 and 5, so I thought of changing the color and it just kinda snowballed from there. :D

[beth_soprano]

Very good!

[the_scary_kitty]

Thanks! :)

[ankareeda]

Awwwwww, this was wonderful! Great work! ♥

She smiled and reached over to clasp his hand, where it rested on the balcony railing.

*happy sigh*

[the_scary_kitty]

Thank you! I figured since it's more canonist in tone, they wouldn't be doing any kissing juuuust yet. But handholding... yeah. It's sweet. :)

[chiarahhue]

great job - if only we could've had THIS ending!

I especially loved Elizabeth giving Ellis a smackdown - from her hospital bed, no less! lol

And of course the balcony scene with the pink moon...

Loved it! THanks for writing!

[the_scary_kitty]

Thank you for reading! Glad you enjoyed it! :D

[the_scary_kitty]

Hee! I kept giggling the whole time I was writing the infirmary scene, 'cause I so wanted to stick it to Ellis. Plus, Lizzie is just so cute when she's snarly.

And thank you for reading! :D