Everything about this pairing is sick and wrong and yet I see a glimmer of redemption in this story, so I adore it for it's creepiness. It's gorgeous in it's darkness and spectacular in the hardness of the characters. That little girl in the garage is all bravado show, but somehow it works and she's found her clown after her lonely days of sitting on the curb waiting.
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Brilliant, Dan.
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and thanks for not letting Me just let this story remain an idea!
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There were a few lines in it where I just had to stop -- and take a breath.
Quite well done.
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But I would have given it back, eventually.
Thanks!
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I have absolutely no idea how you made something so wrong and bad, end with having put that "aww shucks" grin on my face.
You're an amazing writer and the proof is in the ...
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