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kdsch123 December 29 2006, 07:07:06 UTC
Everything about this pairing is sick and wrong and yet I see a glimmer of redemption in this story, so I adore it for it's creepiness. It's gorgeous in it's darkness and spectacular in the hardness of the characters. That little girl in the garage is all bravado show, but somehow it works and she's found her clown after her lonely days of sitting on the curb waiting.

Brilliant, Dan.

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the_satyr_icon December 29 2006, 18:52:58 UTC
Thanks Toots!

and thanks for not letting Me just let this story remain an idea!

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presenceambigue December 29 2006, 08:16:56 UTC
Your rock my imaginary cock, my dear.
There were a few lines in it where I just had to stop -- and take a breath.
Quite well done.

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the_satyr_icon December 29 2006, 18:58:07 UTC
I wanted to take your breath away....literally.
But I would have given it back, eventually.

Thanks!

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presenceambigue December 30 2006, 04:35:26 UTC
You bet! That story actually managed to keep me pretty warm last night...

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lexophilia December 30 2006, 17:29:20 UTC

I have absolutely no idea how you made something so wrong and bad, end with having put that "aww shucks" grin on my face.

You're an amazing writer and the proof is in the ...

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