Comments | the_sammykinz: now I see the world through diamond eyes [2/3]

the_sammykinz

now I see the world through diamond eyes [2/3]

Nov 15, 2010 21:44

Written by Samantha Simard, © 2010
Title: now I see the world through diamond eyes

Rating: R (sexual innuendo, non-serious mention of rape, and some gore this chapter, folks)

Disclaimer: I don’t own the people, places or anything else you recognize, and it’s fiction-I MADE IT UP, therefore the plot is all mine. The title is from “Diamond Eyes (Boom- ( Read more... )

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the_sammykinz November 16 2010, 17:50:01 UTC

More will be up soon, I swear! Thanks for reading! :D

slightlysatanic November 16 2010, 04:05:16 UTC

okay well....that's just MEAN. D:

i chortled at 'wait just a cotton-picking minute'.

one issue i have with this segment - I know you didn't mean it this way, but having jensen thrown the word 'rape' around, even in a joking manner, is pretty offensive and triggery. i don't mean to get all PC and butthurt at you, but maybe you could think of a different way to get the intent across (which i understand - i don't LITERALLY think you meant that jensen was going to ACTUALLY rape jared, haha) without using that particular phrasing? just something to consider.

the_sammykinz November 16 2010, 17:49:29 UTC

I know, it was kind of a terrible place to leave it! I'm not usually this cruel. xD I actually took into consideration what you said - I didn't think of it that way when I was in the writing process. Instead of changing it, what I did was I edited the top parentheses (by the rating on this chapter) to include a "non-serious mention of rape", just in case that could set anyone off. Thanks for pointing it out, and I'm glad you like the story! :D

snfan7797 November 16 2010, 04:08:57 UTC

OMG! I can't believe you did that!
When you said cliffhanger, this was not what I was expecting. WOW!
Now give us the rest before we all hyperventilate.
More soon? Please?
Thanks for sharing.

the_sammykinz November 16 2010, 17:47:19 UTC

Wow, I'm glad I managed to surprise somebody - or a lot of people, from the looks of things. xD Don't worry, there will be more up soon; I'm glad you're enjoying it!

candygramme November 16 2010, 06:06:34 UTC

What have you done? Jensen cannot be road pizza; that's totally unacceptable! Fix him, please.

the_sammykinz November 16 2010, 17:46:03 UTC

Road pizza? Oh my gosh, I'm dying of laughter. xD I will see what I can do in Part 3. ;D

candygramme November 16 2010, 17:58:52 UTC

It's bad form to laugh at flat!Jensen. I am unimpressed. Please make the poor boy well.

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the_sammykinz November 16 2010, 17:45:22 UTC

I'm already working on Part 3, so it shouldn't be too long of a wait! Thank you! :D