I love how you deal with Susan -- she's important! And they are poly, but poly relationships take work too, and you have a very real sense of the "behind the scenes" of this fic, of RDJ and Susan talking things out, reassuring each other. And oh, Jude. Jude jude jude -- I just wanted to give him a hug the entire time.
This sort of thing must be kinda scary and kinda awesome, and you really walk that balance well. I like how it is a struggle for him to figure out his place, and himself, and how the rest of the crew is kinda annoying about it. I love the grittiness of -- things feel like they are rubbing Jude raw, quite literally.
Oh, and did I mention: HOT. SRSLY OMG. You have a way with the details! For instance, this was my favorite line:
Something hard, warm, blunt knocks against his hip. It shifts, and the light scratch of hairs slip into the picture and Jude realizes it’s Robert’s knee. His naked knee. It should be ridiculous, but he’s suddenly aware that he doesn’t know if Robert is
( ... )
<3 coming from someone as talented as you that means a lot :D
And yeah, poly with a married couple would be scary as all fuck, but I always feel bad when wives/significant others just sort of... disappear into the background. Relationships make up a big part of who we are, and I reckon RDJ wouldn't get with a dumb shit.
WOWZA. This was just an absolute joy to read from the beginning all the way through; I loved that you didn't brush over the difficulties (no magical disappearing girlfriend/wife here!) and the way you got a feel for everything else happening around them.
So I basically just made an LJ account just so that I could tell you how much I adore this story. It was so... so DEEP.. and you made their characters so completely true, and you have no idea how much I fucking love this AND YOU. You're so amazing. Reading this was like my blood turned into fucking electricity and this makes me love RDJ even more, which is impossible, and I love Jude so much too and this story is making me ramble because I love it so fucking much. You're awe inspiring. Have my babies. <3
I have no means by which to convey how flattered I am, right this moment. Thank you so much for your kind words! I am anti-rambling (i.e. speechless... which coming from someone that just wrote an 11k fic is probs saying something) from how happy you just made me!
I love you back, you are a lovely, lovely person. May I friend you?
lasdjflkajsdgl I want to give you coherent feedback, but it's hard, you have melted my brain.
This is your first time writing porn? HOTDAMN. HELL OF A FIRST EFFORT.
It was just so sweet and so adorable and so heart-breaking at the same time (Sharing in relationships always gets to me for some reason. I'm not a good sharer, me thinks) and I love your descriptions of Jude and his trains of thought and the humor is brilliant and Robert calling Jude pet names during sex was just DARLING and
I have come to accept that I have strange interests, but I think perhaps our darling Moral Society would disapprove of how pleased I was that my first time writing porn was successful. In so far as porn can be successful-- AND I AM STOPPING THAT TRAIN OF THOUGHT RIGHT THERE kthxbai
I never thought I'd be any good at sharing either, but I think I can sort of, after writing (and researching) this, get how it might happen. I mean... don't be sad. Sharing is caring! ahaha, I am a lame-o
But thank you so much for your kind words, they put a smile on my face!
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I love how you deal with Susan -- she's important! And they are poly, but poly relationships take work too, and you have a very real sense of the "behind the scenes" of this fic, of RDJ and Susan talking things out, reassuring each other. And oh, Jude. Jude jude jude -- I just wanted to give him a hug the entire time.
This sort of thing must be kinda scary and kinda awesome, and you really walk that balance well. I like how it is a struggle for him to figure out his place, and himself, and how the rest of the crew is kinda annoying about it. I love the grittiness of -- things feel like they are rubbing Jude raw, quite literally.
Oh, and did I mention: HOT. SRSLY OMG. You have a way with the details! For instance, this was my favorite line:
Something hard, warm, blunt knocks against his hip. It shifts, and the light scratch of hairs slip into the picture and Jude realizes it’s Robert’s knee. His naked knee. It should be ridiculous, but he’s suddenly aware that he doesn’t know if Robert is ( ... )
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And yeah, poly with a married couple would be scary as all fuck, but I always feel bad when wives/significant others just sort of... disappear into the background. Relationships make up a big part of who we are, and I reckon RDJ wouldn't get with a dumb shit.
ILY thanks for holding my hand through this!
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(I AM OBNOXIOUS)
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i am SO GLAD THIS WAS WRITTEN I LOVED IT
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I ALMOST DIDN'T POST IT BECAUSE I FREAKED OUT THAT YOU WOULDN'T
THANK YOU <3
(You broke my writers block and made me confident for bigbang, since I've never written anything bigger than 4k before)
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I love you back, you are a lovely, lovely person. May I friend you?
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...I....
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DED.
lasdjflkajsdgl I want to give you coherent feedback, but it's hard, you have melted my brain.
This is your first time writing porn? HOTDAMN. HELL OF A FIRST EFFORT.
It was just so sweet and so adorable and so heart-breaking at the same time (Sharing in relationships always gets to me for some reason. I'm not a good sharer, me thinks) and I love your descriptions of Jude and his trains of thought and the humor is brilliant and Robert calling Jude pet names during sex was just DARLING and
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE. ♥
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I have come to accept that I have strange interests, but I think perhaps our darling Moral Society would disapprove of how pleased I was that my first time writing porn was successful. In so far as porn can be successful-- AND I AM STOPPING THAT TRAIN OF THOUGHT RIGHT THERE kthxbai
I never thought I'd be any good at sharing either, but I think I can sort of, after writing (and researching) this, get how it might happen. I mean... don't be sad. Sharing is caring! ahaha, I am a lame-o
But thank you so much for your kind words, they put a smile on my face!
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