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A Film Noir

Jun 15, 2018 00:24

Title: A Film Noir
Artist: sammytoyourclyde
Author: the_rant_girl
Other Pairing(s): Sam/Jessica, Sam/Ruby 2.0, Dean/Other Female Characters (mentioned/implied)
Rating: R(-ish)
Word Count: 5969
Summary: When Sam's fiancé turns up dead, he returns to the family business in hopes of finding just who is responsible.

A/N: Written for the 2018 wincest_reverse bang for the very ( Read more... )

pairing: sam/ruby, character: billie, character: rowena, character: ellen harvelle, pairing: dean/sam, character: chuck, character: samuel campbell, fandom: supernatural, genre: wincest, genre: au, character: charlie bradbury, character: mary winchester, pairing: sam/jessica, character: donna hanscum, character: crowley, character: ruby, genre: het, character: dean winchester, genre: slash, character: benny, character: jessica moore, character: sam winchester, genre: established relationship, character: bela talbot, medium: fic

Comments 8

borgmama1of5 June 16 2018, 03:33:20 UTC

Engaging story--liked how you worked all the characters in as slightly different versions of themselves.

But that ending was just evil!

the_rant_girl June 16 2018, 15:43:33 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed the characters, despite my evilness lol heh ♥♥

stir_of_echoes June 17 2018, 18:58:49 UTC

Oh wow! You had me hooked from the very beginning. A riveting story and awesome characters. I was trying to figure out who did the killing and was so surprised by the ending.

I’m just blown away.

Thank you for sharing. I’ll be adding it to my favourites.

the_rant_girl June 18 2018, 21:37:13 UTC

AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! *tackle hugs and snuggles and smoochifies you* Thank you so very, very much, BB!! I was so very anxious with this so I am beyond thrilled that it worked for you!! I really loved the idea of ending with Lucifer/Sam really being in the cage. And I'm really pleased that the characters came across so well, there was a bunch I'd never written before and it was fun to dip into them. I really loved the idea of Billie and Donna as the lounge singers lol looking all fabulous in the evening dresses and the opera gloves lol And I had to of course get Benny in there lol ( ... )

stir_of_echoes June 18 2018, 22:34:49 UTC

It really did, I loved it so much. It packed a whallop and the ending, I so wasn’t expecting that, but I loved what you did! It’s always fun to try new characters, and I wouldn’t be able to guess which were new to you because they all gelled with the story.

Billie and Donna I could picture them in my head, so gorgeous and decked to the nines :)

I loved we got a little Benny, I do so love him. Thank you for that ♥

Rowena worked well, there’s an air of mystique about her, which suits her well.

hooker!Lisa(who became a hooker after she became a single mother *coughs* Dean had begged her to let him take care of her and the kid but she refused) back before I wrote anything, but uh yes lol there was no use for them.

That could be a story all of its own.

the_rant_girl June 21 2018, 14:17:51 UTC

Ah thank you so much, my lovely!! I was a little unsure of the ending, but the way I'd written it it was kind of the only ending that made sense. I'm so tremendously pleased, and too, that the characters felt true to the story. Would you believe that Charlie, Dean, Mary, Rowena and Sam are the only ones I've written before? lol I mean okay I've written Jessica, but you know, didn't really have to do much with her here really. And John, well he's more Negan-y here than John, and I haven't written Negan before, he kinda has a little bit of Yellow-Eyes!John to him, but yeah he's like 90% swagger lol ( ... )

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